Reviews For Great Plans
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/22/12 22:47
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Well, I had to read the whole thing before reviewing! An I want to feed your plot bunnies really bad! Thi story was really good. I loved how you wrote Snape! It was perfect! And I also loved that Voldemort ordered him to seduce Hermione. I laughed, because it was exactly what Snape wanted!!!!
I wish I could keep reading this story forever...

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/05/11 7:29
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

I think that's true--this time the masters are bowing to the servant. I think Severus is going to get his way:D Hermione handed to him on a silver platter, or should I say silver bed:P Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/02/11 11:31
Chapter: Scheming Snake

Snape is so sneaky. I guess it's a good thing he overheard Ginny and Margaret talking. I'd hate to see his carefully laid plans go to waste:D I think sending her to his personal library was a very safe bet. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/28/11 10:04
Chapter: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger

I think there's an art to accepting a gift. I've gotten to the point that if someone gives something to me I just accept it rather than protesting. Sometimes people just find a gift and think of you so they buy it. I do that a lot. I think I enjoy giving people gifts as much as receiving them. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/24/11 18:43
Chapter: Protecting Her

That Snape is a pretty smooth dude. It was like he had a reasonable excuse for asking the personal questions he asked. Ron is portrayed as the clumsiest lover ever. I didn't find his arguments to make Hermione make out with him convincing at all. I chuckled over the possible taking of points for making a clumsy seduction attempt:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/24/11 17:52
Chapter: Great Plans

By reading Subversa's work, I became a believer in the Good Ship HG/SS. I was looking at her work today and saw that she had one favorite author, you. So, I decided to check out your stories. This is a great start although I thought you got into Severus lusting after Hermione a little soon. But, this was a great chapter. It was well written and that's iimportant to me. And, why not jump into the story right away. I look forward to continuing this story.

Reviewer: Harry_Potter4life
Date: 05/02/09 13:55
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

AWWWWW!!!! Cute! I LOVE this story!

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 03/28/09 22:57
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

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wonderful!
i loved it

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 03/28/09 20:11
Chapter: Protecting Her

i have to say, near the beginning, when snape was talking to ron, was rather amusing...


ive never really read and Hermione/Snape stuff, but this seams like itll be good!

Reviewer: melissa p
Date: 01/15/09 11:44
Chapter: Protecting Her

I like the story

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 05/09/08 16:53
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Great story! hate to see it end. I enjoyed every bit of it.

Reviewer: keller
Date: 05/01/08 11:46
Chapter: Happy Christmas, Miss Granger

I just found this story. I read on my lunch break at work. I love it.

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 04/28/08 13:24
Chapter: Great Plans

to me it seems he's using her, but i ain't read the rest of it yet! your a good writer by the way! i do write myself but am scared what people will think so won't upload them! great 1st chapter. tonkzie ox.

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 04/28/08 13:24
Chapter: Great Plans

to me it seems he's using her, but i ain't read the rest of it yet! your a good writer by the way! i do write myself but am scared what people will think so won't upload them! great 1st chapter. tonkzie ox.

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 04/28/08 13:23
Chapter: Great Plans

to me it seems he's using her, but i ain't read the rest of it yet! your a good writer by the way! i do write myself but am scared what people will think so won't upload them! great 1st chapter. tonkzie ox.

Reviewer: livvy6
Date: 02/14/08 10:47
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

I loved the last paragraph it was perfect, very clever!
Livvy

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 11/29/07 22:50
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

Hello Plot Bunnies you all made me happy today...

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 11/29/07 21:59
Chapter: Serving Two Masters

Hello Plot Bunnies you all made me happy today...

Reviewer: Purdy123abc
Date: 09/03/07 4:33
Chapter: The Waiting Is Over

Oh WOW!!! That was AMAZING! Give the plot bunnies an extra carrot from me Please!!!

Reviewer: Purdy123abc
Date: 09/03/07 3:47
Chapter: Scheming Snake

Fab chapter. In some ways you are a knight. GENIOUS! Keep it up!

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