Gosh, that story brought tears to my eyes... you have so much talent at writing emotion into a story. Very effective use of imagery and symbols. So sad... and so true. *sniff* It's horrible to think that this actually happens to people.
So sad....But you did a great job!
aw... that's so sad... good job
that was really really sad :_(
wow...this was rather amazing...although it doesnt surprise me because allof you fics are....
Well now...beautifully written. AU, I give Lucius more credit than that. btu still. Wonderful story, you're one amazing writer.
1 thing - Bulgaria not Bulgeria...
Now that that's out of the way... that is beautiful. I was literally in tears. You are a very good writer.
An interesting interpretation of Lucius and Narcissa's relationship! Though it's obviously AU, the feelings you describe seem realistic and very sad. I really enjoyed the imagery, too, and the song lyrics throughout the text. The writing, though very good, didn't quite seem to fit to the topic, though, but maybe that's just me. All in all, this was a very good fic!
I Have a RP with my friend, and I play L.Voldemort's daughter/daughter in-law to the Malfoy family. And I always wanted to know about Mr.Malfoy's "other" side. Now I finaly understand why Draco's mom never wanted to be around Mr. Malfoy alone.
~Riley Kay Riddle~
I found this to be an interesting look at the relationship between Narcissa and Lucius... Abusive, but passionate. I am curious, though, did she commit suicide at the end or did she die of a broken heart?
I found your language, narration, and characterization to be beautiful, poetic and hauntingly accurate, if one believes that Narcissa and Lucius' relationship is a broken one. Personally, I am of the opinion that they are fond of eachother, but more or less a trophy couple.
A very interesting look at them, their lives, and their love.
this was really well-written. the ending was a bit sad though. i love the story line you had for her and the characters were consistant throughout the story and their parts were written well. this was a creative and unique topic. I enjoyed reading it.
Oh, this is so pretty! I loved it!!!
That was good - I think its interesting to finally read about Lucius and Narcissa's relationship cos no-one ever really writes about it. Narcissa's one of those interesting characters who I like reading about. nice work
Sad! Sad, sad, sad, not cool! No, really, I loved that, and I love that song :) I thought we only listened to courtry music in Ohio and Kentucky and Tennessee :)
wow now i actually feel bad for narcissa. it was really good
That is a realy good story but its so sad!! i didnt think lusious wasTHAT heartless. thats so sad. *sob* (i liked the song choice.)
Oh, thats so sad....but still really good.
Wow...amazing, I actually felt like I was going to cry.......wow
Okay, another rebiew, I read it again and cried, so thanks for that, and you are a great writer! *sniff* if only that life werent so sad *sniff*