Reviews For Bellatrix
Reviewer: dracosgirlfriend
Date: 07/05/07 20:12
Chapter: Rose Petals

who was bellatrix killing

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/29/05 19:32
Chapter: Rose Petals

Whoa... IT'S GREAT, but really violent and intense. I'm basically repeating what "musiclilly88" said, but she's right. I love the title of this too. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/29/05 19:26
Chapter: Default

The quality makes up for the quantity! *~Great poem!~*

Reviewer: musiclily88
Date: 05/27/05 16:16
Chapter: Rose Petals

This is intense-- I especially liked the second chapter. Very nice, pretty creepy. I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Vader
Date: 05/25/05 6:36
Chapter: Default

This is very nicely done. Though very short, I think it sums up Bellatrix very well. I absolutely love your first stanza and the final one is very good too. The middle stanza gets kind of loose for me, however. I assume this stanza refers to her taking her wand and preparing to cast the killing curse? That is my guess. Am I close? Donít get me wrong, I donít mean to say that it isnít good. I just didnít follow it as well as the first and last stanzas. Really good job on this one. It short, smooth flowing, and captures the character very well I think.

Reviewer: spilled ink
Date: 05/24/05 17:58
Chapter: Default

It was short, but really good!!

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 05/23/05 15:42
Chapter: Default

Good, good! I like it.

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond
Date: 05/04/05 18:30
Chapter: Default

Wow, not bad!

Reviewer: Voldemort rocks
Date: 05/03/05 11:58
Chapter: Default

Wee!!!!! self review, muccacacaca i gave myself a one!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/22/05 11:43
Chapter: Default

Short is good. Sometimes poems are too long and they ramble on and it's a complete waste of good rhymes/ words. I liked this. It got her character just write (lol)

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Loonylovegood426
Date: 03/21/05 16:25
Chapter: Default

Kinda short, but, pretty cool! That sounds like Bella to me!

Author's Response: Thank you, Why it's so short because that's the form to it.

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