who was bellatrix killing
Whoa... IT'S GREAT, but really violent and intense. I'm basically repeating what "musiclilly88" said, but she's right. I love the title of this too. Keep writing.
The quality makes up for the quantity! *~Great poem!~*
This is intense-- I especially liked the second chapter. Very nice, pretty creepy. I enjoyed it.
This is very nicely done. Though very short, I think it sums up Bellatrix very well. I absolutely love your first stanza and the final one is very good too. The middle stanza gets kind of loose for me, however. I assume this stanza refers to her taking her wand and preparing to cast the killing curse? That is my guess. Am I close? Donít get me wrong, I donít mean to say that it isnít good. I just didnít follow it as well as the first and last stanzas. Really good job on this one. It short, smooth flowing, and captures the character very well I think.
It was short, but really good!!
Good, good! I like it.
Wow, not bad!
Wee!!!!! self review, muccacacaca i gave myself a one!
Short is good. Sometimes poems are too long and they ramble on and it's a complete waste of good rhymes/ words. I liked this. It got her character just write (lol)
Author's Response: thank you!
Kinda short, but, pretty cool! That sounds like Bella to me!
Author's Response: Thank you, Why it's so short because that's the form to it.