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Reviews For Bellatrix

Name: dracosgirlfriend (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 20:12 · For: Rose Petals
who was bellatrix killing

Name: Mierielle (Signed) · Date: 05/29/05 19:32 · For: Rose Petals
Whoa... IT'S GREAT, but really violent and intense. I'm basically repeating what "musiclilly88" said, but she's right. I love the title of this too. Keep writing.

Name: Mierielle (Signed) · Date: 05/29/05 19:26 · For: Default
The quality makes up for the quantity! *~Great poem!~*

Name: musiclily88 (Signed) · Date: 05/27/05 16:16 · For: Rose Petals
This is intense-- I especially liked the second chapter. Very nice, pretty creepy. I enjoyed it.

Name: Vader (Signed) · Date: 05/25/05 6:36 · For: Default
This is very nicely done. Though very short, I think it sums up Bellatrix very well. I absolutely love your first stanza and the final one is very good too. The middle stanza gets kind of loose for me, however. I assume this stanza refers to her taking her wand and preparing to cast the killing curse? That is my guess. Am I close? Donít get me wrong, I donít mean to say that it isnít good. I just didnít follow it as well as the first and last stanzas. Really good job on this one. It short, smooth flowing, and captures the character very well I think.

Name: spilled ink (Signed) · Date: 05/24/05 17:58 · For: Default
It was short, but really good!!

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 05/23/05 15:42 · For: Default
Good, good! I like it.

Name: BuckbeakBeyond (Signed) · Date: 05/04/05 18:30 · For: Default
Wow, not bad!

Name: Voldemort rocks (Signed) · Date: 05/03/05 11:58 · For: Default
Wee!!!!! self review, muccacacaca i gave myself a one!

Name: Diamond Quill (Signed) · Date: 03/22/05 11:43 · For: Default
Short is good. Sometimes poems are too long and they ramble on and it's a complete waste of good rhymes/ words. I liked this. It got her character just write (lol)

Author's Response: thank you!

Name: Loonylovegood426 (Signed) · Date: 03/21/05 16:25 · For: Default
Kinda short, but, pretty cool! That sounds like Bella to me!

Author's Response: Thank you, Why it's so short because that's the form to it.

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