Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 04/10/05 12:47
Chapter: Point of No Return

A bit more of an explanation about necromancy, I really want to learn more. I did notice a few grammar errors though. (I intrigued Cody greatly, insteaod It intrigued Cody greatly). But it's a good start!

Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections...its weird, no matter how many times I read over some things, I can never see the mistakes.

Reviewer: Eponine
Date: 04/10/05 0:10
Chapter: Assimilation

YAY! That was my favorite chapter so far. Ravenclaw was a bit of a surprise to me actually. I was thinking Gryffindor, but that's too cliche. I'm glad you went with Ravenclaw. ^^ That "showing the death thing" (I can't quite remember the incantation right now) was really awesome. I like how you fit it in, also. Keep up the great work! I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks much! Say, I wonder if you could tell or whoever might read this...I have had my chapters validated, and even some things rejected, but I have never received an e-mail from Mugglenet, since the initial one with my account that normal??

Reviewer: Eponine
Date: 04/08/05 13:02
Chapter: Point of No Return

This is a really great story so far! It's really original, and I love how you set it during CoS instead of just having some random kid come in their sixth year. Hmm does Cody have a thing for Ginny? Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Cody is so overwhelmed by his new freedom that he a thing for nearly any girl he meets. This leads to much hormonal turmoil. Thanks for the nice words. The next chapter is submitted, but stuck in the queue.

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 04/07/05 16:30
Chapter: The Dangerous Decision

Sorry, but im curious to know if cody has anything to do with Harry?

Author's Response: Nope...just another story in wizarding world, though his life will certainly move in the same circles as Harry's. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: hpchic03
Date: 04/04/05 14:40
Chapter: Point of No Return

Your story is very interesting. Are you going to explain in more depth what a necromancer is? And Cody is actually older than 11 right? Well just a couple of questions I was curious about. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thats for the comments. Cody is almost 12, but nercromancers start their practice at a much earlier age, and thus he is advanced in certain disciplines. His differences come out in bits over time. Thanks much for reading.

Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 03/31/05 22:38
Chapter: Lurking in Shadows

Hmm...interesting chapter. Though you made a good point with the whole alienated because he can never have sex thing. I think it's possible you could scare some of your readers away. :-/

Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 03/24/05 15:46
Chapter: The Dangerous Decision

They are, if you gave them your real email address, they email the reasons to you.

Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 03/23/05 19:24
Chapter: The Dangerous Decision

This looks interesting, I can't wait for you to update, I'd like to see what direction this story takes.

Author's Response: Thanks much! The Next chapter is in the queue and I have several more written

Author's Response: Oh well....still trying to get that next chapter past the "rejected" status. I wish the reasons for "rejected" were noted somewhere.

Reviewer: AmberIsAhpNut
Date: 03/23/05 12:56
Chapter: The Dangerous Decision

Your story is really good. It's not like most stories submitted.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/22/05 13:44
Chapter: The Dangerous Decision

Very good. one question.. have you read the books by Garth Nix with necromancers in? I just wondered because I really like them. This is a nice first chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one. The bit about dreams was spooky but fitting.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I haven't read any Nix books, I just think the word "necromancer" is really cool. Fair warning - the story is very long, mostly R rated, and is decidedly male oriented.

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