I really liked the way you portrayed the characters in this. Very enjoyable.
that was one of the best stories iv evr read write the second chp i cant wait!!!!!
THat was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally good. i just wish it had more than one chap.
That has to be one of the top 2 or 3 one shot stories I have ever read. I can easily see things happening as you wrote them. The part about Harry wanting cotton candy was great, and then feeding it to Ginny was excellent.
Oh, that's a 10 for sure! I loved to read about Ron and Hermione in the background, and I loved to read Ginnys point of view. Do you mind if I add this story to my favorites? ;)
Veyr good! I personally love one-shot fanfiction stories. Very cute, Harry is an absolute devil! *grins* I wouldn't mind being Ginny! Agian great story!
Really good.....not too long.....very nice, it explained the places and relations very well.....
Very enjoyable! Emotions handled well.
Great story I just love Harry/Ginny fics and yours was wonderful. Can't wait to read your other works. 10
I really enjoyed this story and it was fun to see the trio in the Muggle world for a change. I hope you plan to write more stories - you have a lot of promise.
It was wonderful. Great. It saved me from my Melindaleo withdrawal. Thanks! I loved the title, it fit the story perfectly. Thanks again!
This is a wonderful one shot. I hope you write some others. Fantastic job. 10/10
Awwwwwwww!!!!! That was really really good!!!! I liked it alot. I really like how you set it up in a carnaval. Great job!!!
Wonderful first chapter!! Please update ASAP!!
Wow - great as usual. such a sweet, fluffy tale. I loved it. Hope you are keeping up with all your other writing. Yet again another 10/10
very very good, love it loads.
Thanks for this, my face is a bit sore from smiling for so long! you write in a way that I believe I am there as well.
awww that story was so sweet, and the funny thing is just thinking about that matador ride was making me queesy, lol anyways, good job, i liked it a lot