Really really good story, love it!
This is probably the first fanfiction I ever read that sticks out to me. I still love it. :) Keep writing!
I really liked this fanfiction. good job! :)
Aww! This is so cute! I love it! Great job!
This is such a cute story! You're a really great writer too. Ginny's character is really good.
This was great. I had fun reading it.
SEQUEL SEQUEL!! :)
the story is sooooooooo cute!!! totally loved it11plzz continue!!!! its on of my favourites now!!! u r a really good writer!!!continue d gud job!!
wow, thar was such a cute story! loved it
This was fantastic! I've got butterflies from reading it. Even though Harry was guarded at times, Ginny seems to be able to not make him forget but make things more bearable. I used to love the little soft toys you could win. And I've always been a little scared of certain rides, but reading this made me feel as though I could go on any of them with the right person. I'm probably just fantasising because I'm no where near Gryffindore material, but I've enjoyed reading this immensely all the same.
wow, you made Harry and Ginny look like a really good couple. I loved it when you made the carnival seem like a double date thing...could you do something like that for their kids?
DUDE! SEQUEL! NOW! HURRY!
It was a good one, Iol
I want a sequel!!! It's too good!!!
Aww...cute! Really mushy and fluffy but thats okay! :)
This is the first time that I ahve reviewed any of the stories that I read, sicne I started on Mugglenet a couple of weeks ago. here goes -
Like a lot of people, I feel drawn to the H&G stories and yours is the best of the single chapter ones that I have read.
Doesn't try and get too much in too quickly as most of the others do. A nice simple, (and) believeable concept works perfectly. Just enough of a hint of what could/would be to come and makes me wish that there was more.
Have you though about expanding upon this story and filling in your own 6th and 7th years?
Well, that'll do.
Sequel!!I think ti would be great if you wrote soem of the happenings of the summer at the Burrow.Also, if you ever write a novel and publish it, I will be one of the first people to buy it.You are such a good writer!
Loved it!!! O btw if you could actually hear my i would have said it in a sing-song voice!
I think you should write a sequel telling some of they're adventures at the Burrow
Yes I agree that it should have a sequel.OR JUST WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!whoops sorry didn't mean to yell
I will never get tired of this story!It will always be my favorite story.It is just so sweet and innocent, and that is just what Harry needs to make him feel happy and safe.Thank you for writing such a wicked story