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Name: Nicole_Riddle (Signed) · Date: 08/05/05 15:04 · For: A Challenge
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, only I felt that the characters should have had a more gradual change. Malfoy needed more time to warm up to kissing a weasley (Okay, maybe his hormones didn't, but his mind is still strong.) And Ginny was a pretty big tease, but otherwise it was well written. I especially liked the bantering betweeb the two of them, very comical and enjoyable!

Author's Response: The idea I was working from was he was dared to kiss someone and she was the first one he actually saw-- he did say he would go kiss someone else instead, but wanted to see if she'd actually do it. Sort of as a way to taunt her I guess. At first, she was upset about it and then she decided to taunt him back. The kiss was mostly a way to get past him and to annoy him and to tease him all at the same time. She was being a bit of a tease, but then again, so was he.... ;) I'm glad you liked the bantering! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Name: Nicole_Riddle (Signed) · Date: 08/05/05 14:59 · For: A Challenge
I really liked this story, I only thought that Malfoy was slightly too out of Character. His change maybe should have been a little more gradual. But i really liked the bantering between Draco and Ginny, it was quite comical and enjoyable!

Author's Response: Well, I wasn't going for gradual at first-- my idea was he had an actual dare and she was supposed to think he was lying. Then it was all about who could insult whom more... That was fun. He was kind of out of character, I do admit that.... I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for being honest, and for reviewing after you read!

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 05/21/05 13:17 · For: The Visitation and the Dare
What?! Draco got kidnapped? *is horrified that she didn't realize this was up until now* This chapter was really cool. Yes, a bit abrupt (so it seemed to me - it always does when there's a long time lapse in a story), but it worked out quite nicely. Very well done - you explained everything so that even I could understand it! "When?s the wedding?" LOL. ...Ginny was left cackling in the background while Harry merely said, "Oh, for the love of God." Oh, and I saw your answer to my other review - my question if there is anything in progress right now - and all I have to say is I can't wait!!

Author's Response: I know, I was really vague about that. I feel kind of bad about it, too.... I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. And I'm glad it generally made sense. I have a story in queue right now, though it took 3 tries just to submit it. Hopefully it's coming soon :)

Author's Response: You know what I just realized? FOUR is a weird number of chapters to have. I contemplated only doing 3, but people wanted more. It kind of doesn't flow... An odd number would have been better. Ah well.... One-shots are easier, but I'm actually starting another multi-chaptered story now... I must be crazy...

Name: sweetpup (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 17:10 · For: A Challenge
Wow, this was one of the best stories I have read so far, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've got some one-shots in the works.

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 05/15/05 19:28 · For: The Visitation and the Dare
awwwww that was really really nice. i like the way you ended it "I dare you" lol. great job. i enjoyed reading it and i look forward to your one shots. Also, please read my story, Harry Potter and the Last Battle for Peace!!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! It just semed so fitting. I've got a one shot started now!

Name: hawaiianhulagal (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 5:11 · For: The Visitation and the Dare
Interesting ending. Are you going to do a sequel or one-shots to explain some events between Hogwarts and the ending? Glad to see Ginny hasn't changed, still bold and daring!

Author's Response: I am thinking I will write one-shots. Probably not a sequel. I'm glad you liked Ginny. I hope the ending wasn't too abrupt-- it just seemed to be its fitting end.

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 04/30/05 16:58 · For: Being Hateful in the Hallway
I love to write kissing scenes, aren't they fun? You know, I really need to write a Ginny/Draco fic myself. I've often thought about it... it would be really fun, I think. I can't wait for the fourth chapter!!! I'm adding this to my growing favorites list.

Author's Response: Yeah, kissing scenes are fun, but they are kind of hard for me to get "just so." I would definitely read any ginny/draco fic you wrote, because I checked and realized I have read a story by you :) And yes, Draco and Ginny are fun to write, especially if they're arguing. Thank you for adding me to your favorites list!! I'm flattered beyond belief that someone likes my story enough to want to do that... Thanks again!

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 04/30/05 16:31 · For: After the Fact
I just love these type of pairings with Draco. They are so funny. (Some people get all offended at them, which I don't understand - it's like they think fics have to match up with the books or they can't read them. Hello, it's called creativity? Having fun? Ever heard of either? People without a sense of humor annoy me to no end. Hey... no idea what caused that little rant... hmm, no more caffeine for me today.

Author's Response: I just remembered--- I think I've read one or two of your stories before. Hmmm. And I couldn't agree with you more: it's just for fun, it's not even going to necessarily happen. The best we can do is make it as realistic as possible within the restraints of the characteristics these people are given. That's really the challenge of it. And anyone with a good sense of humor is fine by me!! Thanks for the great reviews, they're cheering me right up!

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 04/30/05 16:22 · For: After the Fact
LOL. I loved it when they kept sneaking glances at each other. That was hilarious. Just one thing: "At least someone at her table wasn't totally distraught by her doings, Ginny thought sordidly." Doesn't sordid mean filthy, or corrupt? Sooo it doesn't seem like that adjective makes sense. Off I go to read the next chapter...

Author's Response: Well, it could also kind of mean "wretchedly," which is mostly what I meant by it. I'm not really sure what I was thinking, perhaps I will reevaulate that word choice... And thank you for reading.... The end is actually in queue!

Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 04/30/05 16:06 · For: A Challenge
WOW! I'm impressed! Allow me to take the liberty of saying that your style of writing reminds me of my own - this chapter was funny, but with plenty of excellent description and good vocabulary. The swearing was mild, tasteful, and really funny, inserted at just the right places. I couldn't help but laugh, especially at Draco's reaction. Off I go to read the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you! I love when reviewers tell me what they liked or disliked specifically. I now have to go read your stories, of course. Thank you again!

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 04/28/05 14:19 · For: Being Hateful in the Hallway
My mind is telling me that this cannot be happening but I LOVE IT! I never imagined this happening but as I read, I can actually see it happening. I like the way they argue and also fall for each other at the same time. I really don't have any critisism because to me, it was PERFECT!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I don't even know what to say! :) That's one of the sweetest things anyone's ever said to me about my writing!

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 04/28/05 13:23 · For: After the Fact
omg i love this soooooo much. a full ten. like somebody said up there, this ship can really be done. i love the way they each are kind of disgusted but then they enjoyed it. i really like what you've done here. Great job. I'm about to go read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I was going for, the "kind of disgusted," because it seemed a little more realistic to me. Thank you for he ten and for reading and reviewing!

Name: hawaiianhulagal (Signed) · Date: 04/28/05 4:19 · For: Being Hateful in the Hallway
Hehehe, that was a nice surprise, throwing Luna into the mix. Does Luna think she's the one that's going to knock some sense into Ron? LOVE the Ginny and Draco sparring. Can't wait to see how the challenge unfolds, PLEASE update soon!!

Author's Response: ahh, that's the intrigue, isn't it? :) Thank you, I like Luna, she's sweet, and unusual, and she always tries to be helpful. Thank you for the lovely review!

Name: ghsupporter (Signed) · Date: 04/20/05 0:09 · For: A Challenge
loved it! i agree w/ the previous reviewers, Ginny is a wonderfully wicked char. Made me laugh when they admitted.

Author's Response: Thank you! I like to hear what I'm doing right or wrong, and especially what makes people laugh!

Name: Jazzdiddy (Signed) · Date: 04/17/05 15:58 · For: After the Fact
I love the stubborness of both characters. You're doing a great job making this a believable ship. Most make draco turn soft, and such but this is a very good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Because this is such an unlikely pairing in the first place, there are so many places it could go... And from what we've seen of canon Draco, he's definitely not the softie type. I am trying to make him somewhat believable. Thank you again!

Name: hawaiianhulagal (Signed) · Date: 04/12/05 4:04 · For: After the Fact
Just read your first two chapters, I LOVE your Ginny character, confident, daring, and little wicked to want to make Draco squirm. I can't wait for the battle of wills to continue. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I would love for Ginny to grow into a character like this. Update is coming soon, sorry for the long delay last time, it shouldn't be nearly that long a wait again. There is more battling to come :)

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 19:11 · For: A Challenge
i loved it...and a nice first sentence to start off. i give u a 10. i thought it was going to be terrible because i could never make sense of a G/D relationship but i love this story. really good. please read mines also. update soon please. KC

Author's Response: Thank you, and I completely agree, normally I can't imagine a G/D relationship, but this idea stung me and wouldn't get off my mind. Update is in the works right now, sorry for the long delay last time, it didn't get accepted the first time around. :)

Name: HermioneG (Signed) · Date: 04/07/05 10:17 · For: A Challenge
Oh, please update soon! I liked this chapter so much, that I even give you a 10! *wink*

Author's Response: awww! Thanks! I appreciate every review, and especially the 10! I submitted the next chapter two days ago, so I'm crossing my fingers it'll be here soon :) Thanks again!

Name: Veela Girl (Signed) · Date: 03/27/05 12:01 · For: A Challenge
it was cool! write more please~

Author's Response: Thank you. My friend is pressuring me to write more, so I believe this is now one of three. Let's hope the next part turns out alright....

Name: Hermionechick (Signed) · Date: 03/27/05 0:33 · For: A Challenge
I thought this was kinda funny. I coulden't help laughing when Ginny kissed Draco. Great job, I think you should do another story like this, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: That's sweet of you :) There will be two more parts, if all goes according to plan.

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