Reviewer: MidnightDraco
Date: 07/25/06 19:08
Chapter: No One to Help You Now

What!?!?!?! Harry cant be dead!! When is the next chapter?

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 04/12/05 15:40
Chapter: Meeting Morgana Malfoy

Great starts to your fic, I can't wait to read more. I've added you to the faves list!

Author's Response: Thank you! The entire story is done! I have more fanfiction on my site! I can't post it on Mugglenet because of the ratings so if you want the address, it's in my profile!

Reviewer: gred and forge
Date: 04/10/05 14:27
Chapter: Escape

In my opinion it seems to unrealistic... Harry doesn't even mourn Sirius' death and using floo powder? I doubt that the Order would agree with that....any way, nice start

Author's Response: Last time i checked, fanfiction didnt have to be realistic

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/05/05 15:14
Chapter: Meeting Morgana Malfoy

aha so you finally got chapter 2 past the mods eh? nice work! I'm still reading through the other chapters but from what I've read so far it did seem like chaps 2 & 3 were your weakest chapters! They just didn't seem to flow as well as the others! Obviously since 2 is now up you must have sorted this problem out! Anyway when I've finished reading the rest I'll add some more reviews! You're on my faves list so hopefully you should get some more reviewers soon! Maybe you should sign up to the forum and advertise your fic!

Author's Response: yeah i got the problem sorted

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/02/05 3:44
Chapter: Harry's in Loooooooove

ok so where's chapter 2/3??? I've gone straight from 1-4 with nothing in between!

Author's Response: sorry. Chapter 2 and 3 are up now

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/02/05 3:41
Chapter: Escape

I can't believe you have this many chapters up and yet no-one has taken the time to review! How rude! Anyway from what I've seen so far you have a brilliant writing style- very descriptive! Just one point though I thought the dursley's fire place had been blocked back up after Mr weasley burst through it last time? Either way I'm off to read the next chappies!

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