I really enjoyed this. I thought it was very simple and eloquent, great job!
I really enjoyed this poem. I usually don't like poems too much, but this one was really good. You should write more.
Ok, this is good, but what I really want now is to hear what Ron and especially Malfoy have to say about it. Get both sides of the story, you know? Because all you're seeing is What Hermione sees, and the rest is kind of a mystery. Or is that the idea? It definitely is Hermione's POV, and hers only. But it just leaves you wanting something more, know what I mean?
What's going to happen now....
Now that's what I call a twist. But it would be interesting to see what Ron and Malfoy themselves are thinking. Just a suggestion.
Nice! Will we get any of Ron's feelings in here?
A poem story! That's a new idea, and a good one!
Aww that was sad but happy in the end! I liked it a lot!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am also thinking about adding another chapter, but not sure...
First to review again. So kewl! I love it!
Author's Response: Lol, I think you are the only one who cares to review. Oh well, and I'm glad you love it! That makes me happy to hear, and Last Chapter has been submitted. It should be up soon; I know only 5 chapters, but I thought that fit the title. It got to the part where they 'Broke The Barrier' lol. Keep reading and reviewing! Thank You!
Falling once more... Soo good, I liked it and i was making a tune up for it as I read. You go Gurl.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing that chapter, if you could call it that since it is only a short poem.
Yeah, this is definately good for a song. Can you write music? You should put it to music. I can't really imagine Ron doing something like that because he loves Hermione too much, but I guess there is a first for everything...
Author's Response: I think it's because I've been reading to many Hermione/Draco fanfics. I love writing my own songs, and poems. I basically just love writing, although my one fanfic I submitted was rejected beccause the character I used, to go into depression, they couldn't see them doing that. It kind of ticked me off, but I'm working on fixing it. It excites me that you think it is good for a song. Well keep reading, and reviewing. Chapter 3 is in queue.
Poor Hermione, I know how she feels, that's AWFUL! Oh... great poem, I almost forgot it wasn't real! lol...*10*
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Actually it sort of was real, atleast it came from real feelings. I've been in Hermione's position before, so I decided to write a poem about it. Then I got this grand idea about making it Hermione's point of view. Well I'm glad you guys all like it! Thanks for reviewing! 2nd Chapter : Healing, is in queue.
Awwwww, poor hermione. this read quite well as a poem and I could see potential for a song...
Author's Response: Thanks, if it has potential for a song. That's awesome! 2nd Chapter is in queue.
Please review everyone! I want to know people's opinions! Thanks, Angel of Darkness