this is great but i want more your a good writer
wheres the rest im dying
wheres the rest of it im dying!! you are soo good
This is a great beginning chapter, but you need to add another! Ive had this story in my favorites for a while, and I have been awaited a second chapter from you! Keep up the good work!
i love it! i can't wait to see what happens... hurry up and write more? :)
Lovely little creature isn't he?
Also evil as might add on. This is very good you should really continue!
Hey this is a great story. its different to other ones I've read which is good. Please add a new chapter soon.
Okay its in my favorites and you have a really good idea but please please pretty please be quick with the next chapter
bloody brilliant!! kind of in the words of Ron!! But anyway, plz plz plz update soon, sounds more interesting than other fics i've read!
wow! I really really like this....keep writing...I can't wait to read more!