Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 12/06/04 19:39
Chapter: Switched Burdens

o my gosh that was sooo sad! it made me cry!! :( please udate soon.. i feel bad for hermionie

Author's Response: I am extraoridanrily pleased that I made you cry (not because I like to make people sad though) It means that my writting is getting better =D. I knwo its das about Hermione, but it was bound to happen sometime. Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: hp4life
Date: 12/06/04 15:54
Chapter: Switched Burdens

posting 4 chapter

Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 12/04/04 23:28
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

update soon please!!! hurryhurryhurryhurryhurryhurryhurry!!

Author's Response: Really gald to see the enthuseasim! Don't worry, I try to update as much as possible. Sometimes it takes a while, but thats cos I do alot of stuff for school. Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: Juleselwick
Date: 12/04/04 10:38
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

Can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon!

Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 12/03/04 19:10
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

awsome awsome awsome !

Reviewer: kime
Date: 11/26/04 19:23
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

Great story so far, very interesting concepts and ideas. Well-written; it's very easy to envision the story in my mind. It flows very well too. Some grammar mistakes and typos though, so be careful. Hurry with your next update please!!

Reviewer: Darth Voldemort
Date: 11/26/04 12:13
Chapter: Return Owl

Nevermind about the grammar thing, I just saw your response to someone else's comment. Computers can really be a pain sometimes!

Reviewer: Darth Voldemort
Date: 11/25/04 22:47
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

Brilliant story! I especially like what you've written about the veil. Just watch out for some grammar, but the story is excellent! Fits very well with book five.

Reviewer: wrathofdead
Date: 11/24/04 18:06
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

Very good chapter and story so far. I can't wait to see if her parents are dead or not, but I think that they probably are. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Rhinodome
Date: 11/24/04 2:26
Chapter: Attack on Leeds

A nice chapter. Smooth in its motion from the start to the finish. You are right without giving away the story an accurate summary would be hard get out of this story. On a side note if the death eaters can just apparate in and out of the veil that could be the perfect hiding spot for them. In the Ministry building yet untouchable. To me that seems like an interesting idea at least. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, that was my thouht too. I actually thought of adding it into the chapter, but it didn't really fit into the whole thing with Hermione. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: arielsong
Date: 11/24/04 0:30
Chapter: The Burrow's Christmas

Your story has been great so far! I really like the new ideas you have put into it. I think you should get a beta reader or just someone to read your chapters so there aren't as many mistakes(like Department of Mysterious?). Other than that, you have really got the characters down, although Lupin seems to be acting a little strange, I wonder if there is anything to that?

Author's Response: yes, yes, we have Lupin. He's just sort of stuck in the middle of everything now isn't he? After seeing the prophecy (I really can't spell), he will always feel that he should be the one to explain things to Harry. Thats why he came when Harry was attacked by Dementors. As you can guess, they could have found someone else near by to help. (though we don't no where lupin lives. Thanks for the little spelling thing, i have a crappy spell cheaker that keeps corecting things wrong automatically. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rhinodome
Date: 11/23/04 20:01
Chapter: The Burrow's Christmas

A nice active chapter. Everything seemed to go by fast a few more details might have been nice. But as it is now you get the feel for it all so it works.

Reviewer: Rhinodome
Date: 11/21/04 16:37
Chapter: The part that Remains

A nice chapter full of explanations. Good to have those from time to time.

Reviewer: Sara
Date: 11/21/04 14:26
Chapter: The part that Remains

That helped explain things a lot better! And I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Sara
Date: 11/19/04 14:23
Chapter: Quidditch at Catchpole

This is great! I'm totally hooked!

Reviewer: Rhinodome
Date: 11/19/04 5:11
Chapter: Quidditch at Catchpole

A nice trip home and off to the games. I did not expect the stag to do that so that is a surprising feature. Keep those chapters flowing. Fun to read and fun to think about when reviewing. :)

Reviewer: lalaprincess
Date: 11/18/04 22:22
Chapter: Quidditch at Catchpole

oooooooooooooooo! please write more i soooo want to know what happens!!

Reviewer: Sara
Date: 11/18/04 19:38
Chapter: Separation from the Serpent

I really really really liked your story! Keep writing I can't wait to read what comes next!

Reviewer: Rhinodome
Date: 11/18/04 17:31
Chapter: Separation from the Serpent

An interesting turn of events. Keep the chapters flowing. So far there is a nice flow of events with a nice story behind them. :)

Reviewer: lalaprincess
Date: 11/18/04 17:09
Chapter: Separation from the Serpent

eeek! please keep writing i want to know what happens.

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