Reviewer: Melkor
Date: 01/04/05 23:57
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

Very very cool. Its great to read a fanfic thats not full of pointless shipping and dribble. The only thing is your obviously a good writer, so whats up with the strange spelling mistakes??? Anyway enjoying your story and looking foward to your next post

Author's Response: Ah, I have had many teachers ask me that. I even took an IQ test and they said that I was "special in an odd way" I merely shruged and went back to my life.

Reviewer: sirius_black_fan
Date: 01/04/05 19:35
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

Great Job! Keep on writing! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: kime
Date: 01/03/05 21:56
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

Really amazing job so far....can't wait for more

Reviewer: professormoody
Date: 01/03/05 10:59
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

Great job so far!!

Reviewer: Snowflake_Dove
Date: 01/01/05 23:59
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

This is a really great story, honestly. I love it! Keep going!

Reviewer: danfan4ever
Date: 12/31/04 14:37
Chapter: The Dream

I have to say I'm surprised that Ginny was made captain.... Since she was only the seeker for 3 of the games last year and now that Harry had his spot back... I thought she would have to try out again...for chaser that is

Author's Response: Yes, yes I thought hard about the quidditch captian. The thing is that Harry never actually played with the rest of the team. As a seeker, he never actully did more than catch the snitch. Ginny on the other hand, has played with the other players. Thanks for the review by the way!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 12/28/04 0:48
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

GREAT CHAPTER. i really like how the story is kinda unfolding. keep up the good work!!!! and update soon!!! ^_^

Reviewer: Aggie
Date: 12/27/04 21:27
Chapter: Hermione's View

Another great chapter. You did a good job at explaining what was going on. Doesn't it annoy you when the only thing people type is "posting for chapter"? Not really helpful at all.

Author's Response: Not to be rude, but it does get kinda anoying... I do like the fact that they reviewed.

Reviewer: Aggie
Date: 12/27/04 21:26
Chapter: Occlumency Aside

Great job. You really have this story under control. Keep it up and update soon!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 12/22/04 21:47
Chapter: Hermione's View

nice chapter please keep 'em coming.

Reviewer: The_Immortal_Trumpet
Date: 12/21/04 23:52
Chapter: Hermione's View


Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 12/21/04 20:04
Chapter: Hermione's View


Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 12/21/04 20:03
Chapter: Posession of the Serpent

that was soo good! you must be really smart to write a chapter like that!! :) update soon

Reviewer: black sorceress
Date: 12/21/04 14:15
Chapter: Hermione's View


Reviewer: black sorceress
Date: 12/21/04 14:14
Chapter: Return Owl


Reviewer: hedwigthegreat
Date: 12/21/04 4:41
Chapter: Hermione's View


Reviewer: Aggie
Date: 12/20/04 19:05
Chapter: Posession of the Serpent

Great job. It's crazy reading all these because sometimes you forget you're not reading the actual story. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I love it when people get that feeling; it means my writing's getting better =)

Reviewer: hp4life
Date: 12/20/04 15:45
Chapter: Hermione's View

posting 4 chapter

Reviewer: Juleselwick
Date: 12/20/04 10:19
Chapter: Hermione's View

posting for chapter

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 12/19/04 22:10
Chapter: Posession of the Serpent

oh not trying to be rude but i think Malfoys name is spelled Lucius.

Author's Response: hmmm... I'm not sure; let me look it up... OH! wow, your right, thx alot.

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