Reviewer: DanielleHarmony
Date: 01/19/10 1:57
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

You should reread this out loud. There are a few grammar errors as well as some sentence formation problems..

Reviewer: DanielleHarmony
Date: 01/19/10 1:57
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

You should reread this out loud. There are a few grammar errors as well as some sentence formation problems..

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 05/15/08 17:33
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

awe. this was such a cute story. i loved it :]

Reviewer: Homenumrevelio
Date: 08/25/07 22:33
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

I love your story! It's so canon and it reminds me of JKR's style...I love how you kept the characters close to how they would act in those situations and not making them do anything crazy...the Roger Davies subplot was brilliant!

And props for doing H/G and R/Hr!

Reviewer: Homenumrevelio
Date: 08/25/07 22:25
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

I love your story! It's so canon and it reminds me of JKR's style...I love how you kept the characters close to how they would act in those situations and not making them do anything crazy...the Roger Davies subplot was brilliant!

And props for doing H/G and R/Hr!

Reviewer: Homenumrevelio
Date: 08/25/07 22:25
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

I love your story! It's so canon and it reminds me of JKR's style...I love how you kept the characters close to how they would act in those situations and not making them do anything crazy...the Roger Davies subplot was brilliant!

And props for doing H/G and R/Hr!

Reviewer: Germa
Date: 08/03/07 18:52
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

That was some of the best typing Ive ever read! Quite a few spelling and grammical errers though! :)

Reviewer: innyhakky
Date: 01/04/07 1:18
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

i thought that Roger was a 7th year when harry was in 4th

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/31/06 1:39
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

I am so glad everything worked out! I was worried! Good story!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/31/06 1:01
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

That had a lot to digest in it. It's all good though!

Reviewer: Grangergirl111
Date: 09/04/06 13:29
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

Four words, Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Reviewer: Ouch
Date: 07/29/06 19:02
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

Whoa! Those are just two chapters? Long read, but eaqualy enjoyable! Love it, and have fun writing more stories (if you would...)!

Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 06/17/06 11:21
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

yay! i've finally finished. It took me age to read this chapter. but that's a good thing-it means there's ore to read. Where do i begin? I loved it! It was just so...amazing. You are a very good writer. 10/10 please write more fics

Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 06/15/06 14:52
Chapter: Everything Feels Right

wow. That was really good.

"I’LL TELL YOU WHY HE CARES!,’ cut Harry impatiently, looking sharply at Hermione, ‘BECAUSE HE LIKES YOU — YEAH -,’ Harry turned his attention towards Ron, his index finger pointing straight at him,’ AND YOU! ARE YOU TOO BLIND TO SEE THAT SHE REALLY LIKES YOU — THAT’S WHY SHE WROTE LETTER TO VIKTOR IN FRONT OF YOUR FACE — SO YOU’LL GET MAD AT HER AND SHE CAN PRETEND THAT YOU’RE JEALOUS AND THAT YOU ACTUALLY LIKE HER!’ Harry looked back at Hermione and continued in a terrifyingly soft voice, ‘but don’t worry Hermione — he does like you — very much — YEAH -"

That bit made me think back to the books and i am still trying to think if Hermione has ever written a letter to Krum in front of Ron. I think she might have done. Well if she has that's very interesting because what you wrote might be true. but yeah great story so far it's really good.

Reviewer: inlovewithHP
Date: 06/08/06 20:37
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

good story but might I suggest getting a Beta??

Reviewer: sara_potter
Date: 10/26/05 23:45
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

aMaZiNg!!!!! i luv this story. its the first 1 i added to my fav list! keep writing!!! - fluffy luna (ok i juz felt like sayin that)

Reviewer: Salazar
Date: 09/03/05 5:16
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

That was a trully fantastic story. You put so much emotion into your writing. Please do a sequel!.

Author's Response: i've been thinking bout it..it the meantime check out my other story..'Something Good To Rely On'

Reviewer: yllekcharmed
Date: 06/15/05 19:16
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

i really liked this story it was great! you should deffianty keep writing maybe even a sequal!!

Author's Response: thank you so much..it's nice to read this kind of review...thanks

Reviewer: dracodragon
Date: 06/06/05 0:29
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

i really enjoyed reading this story! you could really feel the emotions of the characters! keep writing! you did a wonderful job with this story! you have lots of potential!!!

Author's Response: thank u soo much...that's very encouraging....u can read my other story 'Something Good To Rely On'... and hopefully u'll love it too!!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/12/05 20:55
Chapter: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

Terrific story, lots of drama, drama, drama! Keep on writing, you're doing a fantastic job!

Author's Response: thanks a lot....ur story is GREAT...

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