You have a lot talent for poetry! I love the way you used Remus' perspective;
That's so sad! Poor Remus! Great poem! You really have a lot of talent!
That is so sad and a brilliant poem
Poor Remus! Poor Remus!
10/10, again. Lovely job, you are a very talented writer, and have a way with word, can't wait to read more!
that was very sweet, and sad, ohh, poor Remmy! Great job, 10/10!
I totally agree with Louisa...if I could write like ya I would do my own stuff, but when I write it just doesn't come out right...:(
Author's Response: It's really weird...it's not like I try really hard or anything...it just comes....I don't know...all my friends go on about how hard it is...but I don't think so...maybe i'm just weird.
A perfect sequel. My favorite stanzas were the second and fourth, they seemed to flow the smoothest.
Author's Response: Thanks again :) :)
WOW. I am so impressed. Your rhyming was perfect, because the words didn't just rhyme, they were the right words to use. I loved it.
Awesome to the max! You have a real gift with prose, use it wisely...
poor remus... i feel sorry for him! You did an awsome job! 10/10.
I would never judge Remus; I LOVE him!!! Excellent job! 10/10
Poor Remmy! I want to comfort him!
That was so heart-rending, it was great.
I SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It Was SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOL!
I would never make fun of werewolves and this poem still made me feel guilty about all the trouble Remus goes through. Very nicely done. Both poems flowed very nicely. Keep writing!
I just actually read it. Errr...whoops? Please ignore last comment it was before I took my medication. P.S Well written and wonderful blah blah blah. Cool.
Very fun and it boosted my morale lot. A lovely little jokey poem which is very light hearted and funny...wait...
Kinda reads like a song more than anything....but good....
Author's Response: Thanks Annie!