Very nice compelling story. It kept me wanting to know what was happening next. I actually did figure out it was Penelope, but by confusion at first. When she had done the deed with Malfoy and compared it to Percy, I figured oh well she was Head Girl with him what he was Head Boy...then I thought it was nonsense cause he left a few years back so I figured I confused her with someone else. However when it turned out not to be Marrieta or Cho, and obviously not Luna, then I settled back to Penelope. But yes, great work!

This is a good story. You made readers keep on waiting by cut of your story in important part on some of your last chapters. Fortunately, I get your story in a finish condition.

OMG! Where's Hermione. And this "evil chick?"
I thought it was Marietta but it seems that I was confused.
Great story so far and plus, you are not afraid of what you put in this story and I admire your bravery. It makes your story really exciting and unique, so differnet and one of a kind. I love your story and your writing style. Keep up the good work.

i was just wondering .. if ron did seperate hermione's legs which he did what was he going to do ? i would like 2 here back soon and the story is really good so far

lol at the part "holy shit i'm in love with my friend"

Awesome story. Loved all the details & ideas. Very creative!

OMG~ I HAVE TO CLEAN UP THE HOUSE BECUASE GUEST FROM NORTH CAROLINA ARE FLYING IN AND ALL I'M DOING IS READING YOU STORY~

that was good.......................good job :-D

Ok, this is my 1st review for any of the chapters. Dont worry though cause its just that I havent had any time to write one cause I have to read the next chapter right away! Your stories are great. This is the best one that ive ever read on mugglenet. great job, keep writing! ~=)

Your story was amazing!!!!!! Ahh I loved it soo much! Very good job, I'm a huge Harry/Hermione fan, and this is definately one of the bests! It's one of my favorites.. Thank you so much. Keep writing, you're such a talented writer!