Reviewer: Free_Phoenix
Date: 10/12/05 13:05
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

I love storybook ending sometimes, and I like this one! 10/10

Author's Response: Haha, this story is such a cliched little fairytale. *shrug* As long as no one hates it, lol. Free_Phoenix, you're fantastic! *hi-five*

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 09/07/05 13:37
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Yey! Fluff, fluff, fluff and a bit more fluff! very soppy and romantic!

Author's Response: Fluff! *munch* Well, actually, I don't eat fluff anymore....but I do still write it....anyhoodle. Eesh, soppy and romantic? I hope that's not a bad thing. *worried face* *definitely aware that that is true, lol* But anyway, whether you liked it or not, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pathetic_pettigrew
Date: 08/01/05 5:37
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

I love that song, and I love this fanfic.(A short, but hopefully sweet, review.) Actually maybe just saying that isn't very helpful, arghh!Erm, what appealed to me most is the way it's realistic and compliments J.K.s style;I could see her actually writing this, which is not the case with fics where Snape-hurts-Lily-James-rescues-her-they-make-mad-passionate-love...though I have to admit I'm disturbingly addicted to those ;-) Sorry, this definitely isn't short anymore!

Author's Response: Pssh, length of reviews is of no consequence, I'm thrilled you're even reviewing! I just reread this thing after seeing your review, and...well, frankly, my first thought was, "WOW this is so suckariffically cliched," but maybe that's just me. Still, though, glad you liked it, at any rate. And I think those L/J fics are absolutely hilarious, and at times very well-written. *grin* Thankee for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Lady Katherine
Date: 04/14/05 23:25
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

I'm not sure if we're really allowed to use reviews like a message board.....but what the heck! I didn't expect you to catch my 'invisible indication', but I'm always so worried that someone will take me seriously and get offended. So, hope you get inspiration very soon! (This comes from a fellow writer, though I haven't done any fanfics yet. All my written prose is original. Hee hee) Good luck!

Author's Response: I know what you mean about the offending thing, message boards and such can sometimes be stressful like that because you never know what to say to whom and all. Yikes. I hope I get inspiration soon too, lol, and I return the sentiment, because really, what writer doesn't want inspiration? (Speaking of, I write original prose too, only all my fanfics are slowly taking over my writing folder, lol.) Cheers!

Reviewer: Lady Katherine
Date: 04/01/05 22:13
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Ooookay, my review was a tad odd. It almost seemed like I was implying that all of your OTHER fics I didn't like. It's quite the opposite, actually. I like all of them! (I'm especially hooked on the non-one-shot ones. Update please!)

Author's Response: Oh, I didn't even catch that invisible implication! Don't worry about it. Um, about updating...well, I started another one-shot, and that's taking up my time, and I sort of...ran out of all inspiration. Um. Yeah. But I'll try!!! Really!!! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Lady Katherine
Date: 04/01/05 22:10
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Veeeeeeery cute! I've found that many of the 'romance' fics are very overdone. Overdone to the point that it's stupid, not romantic. I don't like anything too serious or intense. These kids are 17 or under, for goodness' sake! So, if I find something like you have just done that is very sweet, I make a point to compliment on it. Keep up the good work! ;-`

Author's Response: Squee! The promotion of fluff is a great thing. I agree. I mean, honestly, James and Lily were kids, really. There's not going to be anything *too* serious about them, even though they were all, you know, fighting Voldie. Still. Ahh, I'm rambling now. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: hpgurl2121
Date: 03/20/05 11:14
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

oh, wow! that was sooo good! of course, your fics always r, but u get what i'm saying! and i can't believe how well that song fit into your plot! it's sooo good! P.S. I LOVE MUSICALS! I'M OBSESSED! (did i spell obsessed right? god, i'm still sleepy. can't spell in the mornings. lol!)

Author's Response: I was trying to think of a plot for this song, because I love it so much, and I was like, "Am I stupid?! Lily and James, of course!" It does fit creepily well. Musicals are WONDERFUL. I

Author's Response: I...didn't finish my response. What a weirdo I am. Um, let's pretend I remember what I was going to say. I'm obsessed too! And yes, you did spell it right. I can't spell in the mornings either. Cheers for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kait
Date: 03/20/05 8:30
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Wow! That was incredibly good! I can't believe how emotional you writing is! I was nearly in tears at times! Beautifully written.

Author's Response: My writing? Emotional? *blinks* Wow...I really love you guys, y'know? *beams* Ah, gosh, if you thought this one was bad, I'm trying to find a way to fit in the song "I Still Believe" from Miss Saigon into a story, some story, *any* story, because that song is so incredibly moving. Er...*/tangent* Thanks so much for reviewing, your reviews really brighten my day! :)

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 03/18/05 19:38
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

That was by far the BEST Lily/James fic I have ever read! I can picture them actually getting together like tha, it's much more believeable than those stories where one of them is kidnapped by Voldiepoo.

Author's Response: Really?! *beams* Wow, I feel all smiley now! And there are seriously stories out there where they've been kidnapped by Voldie? Yikes. *koffs* Ah, well. Different conceptions, and all that. And I'm happy you agree with my conception of how it happened! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 03/18/05 16:44
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Love that this fic! Nothing more to say except it was cute, fluffly and oh so sweet... just what I needed!

Author's Response: Aw, sweet fluff is exactly what everyone needs! *hunts down a fluffy fic* It's nice to know that my fic was 'just what you needed.' I'm very flattered! Thanks for much for saying that, and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 03/18/05 16:18
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

wow! that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo (sry that was so long!) cute! omg i loved it, a bit fast, but sooo good! :):):)

Author's Response: I couldn't even find the 'Respond' button, your 'so' was sooooooo long! lo. (I'm not making fun of you, btw. It's totally cool.) I'm glad you loved it. My one-shots tend to be a bit speedy. Er, I'll have to work on that. (Whereas my longer fics are atrociously drawn-out. Oh, dear.) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 03/17/05 18:37
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

i've read a lot of james and lily fanfics, but i've just gotta say, that that was just the way that i wanted it, the confused part where she wasn't sure how she felt, then how she realized, how there was still friendship, it was ALL there! so, i think you get the gist of what i'm saying, GREAT STORY! if you can, could you please make another story or something? because i would die to read it!

Author's Response: It's really something to get a compliment like this in an area as expansive as Lily/James. This is something special! I have several other stories floating around mugglenet, no other Lily/James ones as of yet, but I'll try to write another one. Thanks so much for the wonderfully thoughtful review!

Reviewer: ginnypotter04
Date: 03/16/05 16:30
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

awwwwww that was so sweet!!!!! oh i loved it a lot, yay musicals!!! lol good job!

Author's Response: *blushes* Dohh, thanks so much! *huggles musicals happily*

Reviewer: Sorceress
Date: 03/16/05 14:56
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Squee! i love musicals! this was on eof the best songfics i've read in ages!

Author's Response: *dances* Everything's alright, yes, everything alright! Okay, sorry. Hurrah for musicals, and hurrah to you for reviewing! *wink*

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 03/16/05 13:23
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Yep, excellent, love little one shots ofr a nice read. you should put it as finished btw.... you're lucky i was looking properly becuase I sometimes only read one shots that say complete.... Excelent bit of writing and one of new favs.

Author's Response: *beams* Thankee. And yes, I am an utter moron and forget the 'completed' button. I'm the same way. That's fixed now. All I can say in my defense is that I was so flustered by it being rejected the first time I sent it in that I forgot all about it the second time. *sigh* But I'm glad you liked. Thanks for always reviewing my stories!

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 03/16/05 7:02
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING I DON'T KNOW HOW TO LOVE HIM THIS! i am a total band geek and one of our pieces is theMagic of Andrew Lloyd Webber and it's a medly of his greatest works and this is one of the songs. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! well, great job on this one. is this going to be a fully fledged fanfic or a one shot?

Author's Response: Wow. Maybe you go to my school. We're playing that piece as well for our annual Broadway Night thing, and I'm the lucky duckling who gets to SING it! Yay! (That and "Everything's Alright."

Author's Response: Er, I meant I get to sing "I Don't Know How to Love Him." Not the whole medley. Obviously. Even if that would be wicked cool.

Reviewer: greenlady
Date: 03/15/05 20:56
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Short, but sweet. Not a bad one for L/J. The song fits this fic perfectly, much better than it fits the musical (I think falling in love with Jesus isn't really an option; it's a song about love between an ordinary man and a woman).

Author's Response: Yeah, the song makes me sad. I mean, it fits the musical and all, but it's so depressing. "I love him, but if he loved me, I'd run" is not a happy thought, I must say. *sigh* I thought it might not fit this fic because at the end, Mary Magdalene says she'd "turn her head/back away" if she found out he loved her, which is, er, not exactly what happens in this fic, although I tried to include that. Thanks so much for being the very first reviewer!

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