Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/26/12 17:59
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Nice! I loved it, especially Ani, because she's so practical and down-to-earth and that was exactly what Lily neede at that moment.

Reviewer: Twiilight HP
Date: 06/04/11 0:24
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

This is so romantic!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 07/02/08 15:04
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

aaaww!!! that was so sweet!! and i liked how you could hear lily's thoughts.

Reviewer: Phoenix_tears08
Date: 04/02/08 15:29
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

how cute !!!!! just one of those utterly fluffly adorable one shots no girl can resist !!!! why cant i find my james or my ron or my harry even !!! i love james hehe

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/01/08 13:53
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

this story is so sweet and yes i am a girl alot of people i expect would be confused about me complemented stuff like this by looking at my pen name

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/18/08 23:57
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

YAY!!! That's all. :)

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 09/02/07 3:34
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

that was so cute :]

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/08/07 11:16
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Eeek! That was so cute!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 04/22/07 15:16
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

*snicker* serves them right. how ironic. stuck in an empty classroom, with nothing to do... can't help themselves... lol
I loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 01/12/07 22:08
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

That was probably my fifth time reading that.

Reviewer: Lilyflower24
Date: 12/26/06 9:20
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

AWWWWWWWWW, so cliched, but so sweet.... I love cliche...

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/10/06 17:15
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Aww. Luv the fluff.

Reviewer: bookworm2011
Date: 05/22/06 18:40
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

So sweet

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/17/06 2:42
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

**sniff**

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 05/05/06 18:07
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Aww! So cute. I love how you write Lily as the not-so-perfect girl, you don't see that very often. I loved it! Exactly how I would imagine it. 10/10

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 04/29/06 22:54
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

I just stumbled across this story, and I just saw JCSuperstar yesterday for the second time... fancy that! Your story and the song compliment each other so well... lovely job. I really enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/21/06 20:53
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I'm a huge fan of all your works, but I didn't realize you were such a Broadway fan until now. I think this was an amazing L/J. I write L/Js and I know that it is extremely hard to write L/J one-shot because you don't want to rush it yet you need to keep it in one story. It was a little rushed, but that usually happens in one-shots. I really enjoyed reading this. I really should tell you how much you remind me of my BFF who is extremely obsessed with HP, loves Broadway more than I do, and always ends whatevers she writes with "FIN." You write better fics than she does, though.... Anyway, I know this review is random but I really enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: shellabella818
Date: 04/21/06 8:53
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

awww

Reviewer: Tonks93
Date: 04/20/06 16:12
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

GREAT STORY!!

Reviewer: wishiwereaweasley
Date: 03/09/06 0:53
Chapter: Locked Room, Stormy Night

Great job! I really liked how you used the song, it fit perfectly. The interaction between the two of them in the locked room was perfect. A little fight, a little uncertainty, and then a little love! The only (small) complaint I have is that it's tough for affection to turn around like that in a week. I know this is a one-shot, so you don't have time for tons of development, but making it happen over a month, just showing a small incident or two here and there might be more believeable. Otherwise, not a complaint in sight! And I love this quote: "Hate is only love that's missed its mark." I may have to use that in a fic myself sometime...

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