:( i liked it but it was so sad
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!That it so sad. Its exactly how i picture there relationship ending up. Him dieing. ohh i hope she dosent do taht though.
ooooh... I feel like i was punched in the stomach! This is like the 4th one shot in a row i read where Ron snuffed it! Why does everone want to kill him!
Seriously, this was an amazing one shot! Deffinitely dark! I wondered if that was what he was scribbling! Oh poor Hermione. I really hope that doesnt happen in book 7.
That's too sad! I am literally crying right now! Why do all the cute guys have to die?
Author's Response: Lol... I'm sorry I made you cry... I really do like Ron, I just wanted to leave the ending up for interpretation.
no no no no no he cant die he cant!!! i tell you loved it
Author's Response: Thanks- I really didn't enjoy killing off Ron... but it just fit.
Nicely written, I like your imagery and you can write a good fight scene (an ability I have always rather lacked) Although, I had to laugh at that last line. Maybe thats just me.
Author's Response: Yeah... that last line didn't seem to flow quite right... thanks for the review! ~Paprika
I like the characterization (very well done) and the general plot, but it seems very rushed in the middle, which hurts it some.
Author's Response: Oh, is it? I'd never done a one-shot before this, so I really had no idea. Thank you so much for the helpful review. ~Paprika
OMG...NOOOOOOOOOOO... how sad i feel lyk cryin.... defintly 10!!!!!! :'( awwwwww..
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! It always makes me so happy to get reviews on this story- it's old but people still read it! Yay for you all!
I'm not a R/Hr shipper, but this is absolutely amazing. Way to go!
Author's Response: I'm guessing that you ship H/Hr... this is a good R/Hr for you... with Ron gone now Hermione can date Harry! Not how I intended it... but hey! Thank you so much for reviewing!
really well written story. i wanna cry!! that's such a sad story!!
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you!
That was good. Um, I find it hard to see the Death Eaters attacking Hogsmeade like that though, and it was pretty obvious that Ron was writing a letter to Hermione. 7/10.
Author's Response: Thanks much! ~Paprika
Nooooooo! Poor Hermione! I thought this story was ok, but I found it hard to believe that the Death Eaters would randomly attack in Hogsmeade.
Author's Response: Thank you, for the sake of not boring you all I decided not to go into the process of how Voldemort knew that it was a Hogsmeade weekend when Harry wouldn't have much protection, but maybe I should...
thats soo sad boohoo boohoo (but great writing)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm loving these reviews!
That was really sad! But it was rather obvious that Ron was writing a letter to her telling her he loved her. Still rating this an 8, however! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I knew that the letter would be a give-away, but I didn't think that Hermione would be able to see that. Love is blind. ^-^
I always admire the people who have the ability to kill one of the characters, especially one of the tro or Ginny. This was really good writing and I look foreward to reading more of your stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you, my friends all tell me not to kill people hehe.
That was very sad! Good writing style, I enjoyed it, despite killing Ron!
Author's Response: Oh yay, first reviewer for this story! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and I'm sad about Ron too. I just got the idea for this story in Biology one day when I got a test finished early, so it's a one-shot and it needed to end some way. Besides, I have two chapter fics going now and I don't think I could add another without major updating problems. But anyways, I don't know why exactly I was going on about that- oh ya- Ron. I cried when I wrote that part... :(. Anyways thanks for your review!
