Reviews For Unequal Balance
Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/28/07 21:41
Chapter: Chapter 13: Study Sessions

so sirius is falling in love... hmm...

good chapter...

Author's Response: Why, Thank You!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/02/07 18:12
Chapter: Strong Arms Around Her

this is really good and sort of different from all the other fics. this one focuses more on voldemort and all. the rest are just into pranks and lily and james, remus dating one person continuously and sirius having several dates. over all, i like it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much Afifa! I thought the Marauder Era deserved a little more excitement than just school. I'm glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/02/07 18:08
Chapter: Strong Arms Around Her

i like i. i mean its a really good fic and is sort of different too.

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 06/25/07 0:39
Chapter: The Waiting Hours

Aaaa finally... the long awaited chapter... And the waiting was worht it... it was lit short... or may be it wasnt and i was craving for more, im not sure...

I loved it as usual, although I mucht admit im very intrigued about the nightmares!... the rain drop images are wonderful!


Author's Response: You'll find out all about (or mostly about) the nightmares in the following chapter, which has been completed and should be up soon. This chapter was a little short, but the next is a little longer. Thanks Hormiga!!!

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 10/28/06 13:33
Chapter: In the Forest

Jajajajaj its no problem I said that dont worry about puntuation sice its pretty hard to get it in a english keyboard

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 10/17/06 17:01
Chapter: In the Forest

Wow...dark chapter, now Im more intrigued than ever... I love the desciption of the forests and the way u created the centaur, veeerrryyy nice!!! Dont worry about los signos d interrogacion, no es grave si los pones o no. Its cool enough u actually escribas espaņol

Author's Response: Okay mi amigo- you might have to write me a translation of what you just said....I'm totally lost. But thank you once again for leaving another all-flatterring review (I don't even know if that's a word). OH!!! The last thing you wrote was it is cool I write in spanish...I guess- what little I actually know... Thank You! ~OAW

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 10/16/06 17:20
Chapter: In the Forest

This was an extremely well-written chapter, full of dimension. It's really no wonder Addalynn was a Gryffindor.

Nothing short of Amazing : )

Author's Response: Oh, why thank you once again sunshine! I've been working on adding more to each chapter, making it longer, giving more meat to the bones,...etc... I hope you carry your opinion on to Chapter 11! : ) ~OAW

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 10/12/06 14:32
Chapter: Jigsaw

Amigo, pero gracias por the status of friend! :-)

Author's Response: De nada! ?Como se dice 'it was my pleasure' en espanol? (sorry about the accent marks and the question mark at the beginning- I don't know how to make those work on the web) ~OAW

Reviewer: Pink_Fluff
Date: 10/11/06 5:09
Chapter: Jigsaw

Heya! Sorry for not keeping up with reviews ; I have been reading it though!

As always this is fantastic!! There's a wonderful blend of mystery and darkness. I love it!!

I'm already tearing my hair out in anticipation for the next chapter. Please hurry or I'll be bald!!!

Author's Response: Oh, we wouldn't want that now would we? Don't worry, the mods are being picky and I have to revise the !0th chapter once again. But please don't pull out your hair! ~OAW

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 09/26/06 15:13
Chapter: Jigsaw

Back in to reviewing!!! Amazing chapter... as usual to be honest...

Author's Response: Thanks Hormiga! I hope you keep reading...Chapter 10 just go trejected for grammar usual. Oh, well, I'm going over it one more time and sending it back in. Hopefully it'll be up soon! Gracias y adios mi amiga o mi amigo!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/11/06 18:12
Chapter: On the Way Home

Phew...I got scared there. You never know WHAT to expect from some writers... of course, I should have realized you're too good a writer to sink that low.
Keep up the fantastic writing : )

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! That's encouraging me to write! So off to the typing! -OAW

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/10/06 16:50
Chapter: Jigsaw

Darn submit button...
PLEASE don't put Addalyn w/ Snape!

Author's Response: Take a deep breath, I'm not.

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/10/06 16:49
Chapter: On the Way Home

OK, now I REALLY can't wait for an update.
Great chapter : )

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you'll keep reading more as I go along, my chapters just keep getting longer and longer and more and more detailed...

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/10/06 16:48
Chapter: On the Way Home

OK, now I REALLY can't wait for an update.
Great chapter : )

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/20/06 16:17
Chapter: On the Way Home

I love this story. The characters are well-developed, and you have a great writing style. I hope that you update soon!
Keep it up : )

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I haven't updated in a while, not since at least March, but I don't know really. I will update sometime in July though...right now I've been working an awful lot. Thanks for leaving a review with so many nice things to say!!! Sincerely, On Angels Wings

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 06/20/06 12:29
Chapter: Lurking in the Shadows

no actualy, they just said something like that it had been rejected. But they did like a different one I submitted. :-)

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 06/14/06 22:15
Chapter: Lurking in the Shadows

unfortunatley they rejected it and since i'm not sure what was wrong with it, i don't know how to fix it. thanks tho for letting me know :-)

Author's Response: didn't they tell you what was wrong in the e-mail?

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 05/30/06 21:16
Chapter: Lurking in the Shadows

Sorry to bug you, but I just have a quick question. Umm, so I just submitted a story and I have like no idea what's going onwith it. It shows up in my account, but not anywhere else. Are they like reading it over or something?

Author's Response: Yeah, right now it's in queue but it takes about a week give or take some for them to post it. But if it's rejected (like mine often are...) they'll e-mail you and erase it from their database until you re-submit it (after you fix what they asked you to of course). But don't worry! Let me know when it's available to read!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Angel

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 05/23/06 21:08
Chapter: Lurking in the Shadows

Yeah CR's what my friend calls me. Of course i'll keep reading. (I'm always checking the "most recent" section to see if it's been updated) There's a lot of maurader (did I spell that right?) fanfiction i can't get into. (I think it's cuz it's not believable enough. or the characters aren't that well written. But yours really isn't like that)

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm very glad that you like my story so much....I wasn't sure about how I was portraying the characters even with Hormiga and notabanana still reading after so long. But hey...I'm still learning the trade around here. Thanks! ~Angel

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 05/22/06 16:07
Chapter: Lurking in the Shadows

Wow, this is one of the best fics i've ever read. (and I've read quite a few) I know you've prbably got scads of people saying this, but, please review!

Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, before I forget to tell you, I like your name CR! *laughs* Yeah, I like Marauder fiction too...but there's a lot of them that I just can't seem to stick to. Maybe something's wrong with me. Oh well. I hope you keep reading! Sincerely, On Angels Wings

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