Is this the challenge I set you?
Either way it is fantastic! You should have PM'd me the link, I like the way you've used your own character rather than one we may have heard of in the book it's entirely believeable, and well formatted. I'm enjoying it much... I'm going to read on...
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry, I'll PM it to you after I update it. I kind of went on spring vacation before I saw that it got through.
oooo intense!!! update soon because i am eagerly awaiting more chapters!!!
Author's Response: Well, I'm back and ready, just need to tweak the next chappie a bit.
Marry me. I know its sudden, but after reading you’re fanfic, I have decided that you are the woman for me. Anyone with that much talent is more than worthy of marrying me. In case you have any doubts, here’s my picture, and the picture of your ring. NOT! Sorry, just finished your, "The Best Fanfic Ever!" story. I loved that review. This story has a very good start, and I'm eagerly awaiting more. 10.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the other story too. Haha, at first I thought this review was in the wrong area. I'm back from spring vaca so you can expect more very soon!
Author's Response: submitted chappie two, but the mods didn't like it, so I'll have to fix it... lucky me, :-)
This is really good. I like how you are doing something that I have never seen before, and with an OC, rather than a canon character. You started out the story in a good way, giving action rather than a long, drawn out opening. It will be interesting to see where you go with this, and how helpful she can be to the Order. There were a few capitalization and dialouge errors, but nothing really important. A BETA would catch them, but I doubt the normal reader would. Nicely done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, are there some errors? Crap, I'll go back and check them. But thanks! :-D
Author's Response: There! I fixed them, at least...I think I did...
You, like many other authors, have learned the method of secret cliffhangers. However, you are seperated by these other authors with your unique plot. This chapter was awesome! I can't wait what happens next, and I really want to see what else the Death Eaters have planned (or not planned). Don't keep us in suspence for too long!
Author's Response: I'll try not to, but I'm also trying to give an insider's view of OotP so it'll kind be a lot of flashbacks in between then and now.
Wow, brillinat! I love it, with innner demons and Tonks and amazing stuff like that. You know when you called him Mason, did you mean Mason as in Dursley-doing-deal-having-dinner-with-mason-in-Cos? or is this a different mason?
Author's Response: Yeah, its a different Mason. That's an interesting thought though...The Masons secretly spies for the Death Eaters...hmmm
I love it! I am a big fan of stories about underdog and all that. Can't wait to see if she resists or if she gives in the tourcure. Man I can't spell.
Author's Response: haha, s'okay, I have my non-spelling days too.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: I see you've found my other fic!
Yeah I'm with the rest update! Good story plot so far...
Author's Response: thanks
Wow. You also have me hooked. The suspence mixed in with the plot just has a power of its' own! Excellent plot! Koodos to you, I'll be returning for the next chapter, which, hopefully arrives soon.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much, and kudos to you for using kudos! LOL, hopefully the next chapter will get validated soon, especially since there are new mods. :-)
ahhhh!!!!!update soon or i will die!!!!!!
Author's Response: Chapter 1 submitted, well, it will be called the second chapter, but since the first was technically a prologue, the second chapter will be the first. Wow, I'm confusing myself even writing that out. LOL. Just let it be safe to say that I updated.
That's really good! You've got me hooked.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much!