this story is awesome and i like the fact that it's so long
great start! you've already got me hooked!
I was so excited to start reading your story and it is the first mystery i've read on Mugglenet. Brillant work!
love the story! I was hoping I would come across a story where Sirius came back from the veil
Ahhh!!! Oh no oh no oh no... this is excellent so far, by the way. I have commented yet because I've wanted to keep going on with the story but this... is... just... AHH!! Oh man. I can't take the suspense. Excellent, excellent story indeed! I'm loving it thus far!!!
I know that i have never posted a review before - but i just wanted to say this is the best story i have read on any sight - i can imagine JKR writing it. This is fantastic
*comes in to randomly blurt out praises of Fate...*
Well done on winning the QSQ! *grin* *hugs* You thoroughly deserved this!
Seriously. Fate is amazing. Everything from the plot, to characters to little ideas/inventions, is all weaved together in a fantastic way, that keeps the reader *entralled* throughout! I must have read this fic multiple times now, but I still love it eveytime I read.
Amazing. Especially the ending. *huggles Sirius*
Once again, well done!!
~Suzie
first eleven years of existence? he met sirius in poa
this diserved the silver. really good
Liisa, congratulations on winning the Quicksilver Quill Award for Best History/Mystery Story! This story totally deserves it. :)
Wonderful, wonderful ending. Normally I'd left constructive reviews, but to you it seems I haven't managed. You leave me in tears of joy / of sadness / of bittersweetness. I am craying, at this very moment, writing this - I cried when I knew what was going to happen with James and Lily, cried when I thought their travel back in time wouldn't help, cried when I read of their deaths, cried of the goodbyes the timetravelers gave their other self, cried, also, now: it ended happily afterall. I felt like a parent for these characters (truly, I did, you wrote such great characters!), these person. Now I am happy they are fine, all of them!
(Thank you for an amazing read, and an amazing story. Definitely on my faves.)
CUSTODY BATTLE FOR BOY-WHO-LIVED
DEATH EATERS UNMASKED
PETTIGREW TO BE GIVEN DEMENTOR’S KISS
IS HARRY POTTER SAFE WITH SIRIUS BLACK?
A couple of questions:
Were these newspaper titles from his childhood, or as a sixteen year old? Where was Voldemort in the battle - who defeated him? Why is Remus called Uncle? Can you briefly summarise what changed?
In another note, loved this story: in one sitting I've been reading from chapter 1 to 42, and with no looking-back. Been recommended to the QSQA (Quick Silver Quils Award); this story deserves to be so, as well. Regards, James
I loved this story, in fact I read it twice and still found in extreamly intresting. You should think about writing a sequel to it about harry going into his 5th year again or maybe skip ahead to 7th. loved it anyway. Thanks for the great read!
It too bad this wasn't written after book 6 with all the speculations of Snape and Lily. Oh, well.
good conversation between Dumbledore and Snape. good suspence
compelling read. I like how in the last chapter you tied in Emily's abd Arianna's death with Peter's betrayal. It may be asking alot but I hope Peter can get a little more depth in character.
It is good that you account for the possibility that everything might change.
