Reviews For Fate
Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 16:03
Chapter: Luckily or Unluckily

Yay a date! That part made me laugh. But ending the chapter on a serious note was a pretty good move.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:58
Chapter: Ask Me Again

yay Harry and Ginny are together!!!:) I wonder how Harry will take the time travel news?

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:51
Chapter: You Will Be Erased

I like the seriousness of the time travel plan mixed up with the fun of being locked in the Room of Requirement.10/10

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:45
Chapter: Quite a Paradox

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh, that's just priceless, jamming Ron and Hermione in the Room of Requirement!! Oh, I'm glad that this chapter was more lighthearted than the previous one. The characters deserve some fun.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:38
Chapter: You're Not Alone

Sweet chapter. A lot of tears, but I'm glad that Harry smiled at the end.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:30
Chapter: You Promised

I'm a tiny bit confused, but that didn't stop me from feeling really sad for Harry. He doesn't deserve the life he's living. And how can there be a dead Sirius and a live Sirius????!!!

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:22
Chapter: I Used To

What happened to Sirius???!!! Why is there a body and a man???!! AAAHHHHHHHH!!!

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:14
Chapter: It Happens For a Reason

Wow! That was a really funny chapter, and i was guffawing throughout it. But I noticed one little spelling mistake. Sorry, but it's in my nature to spot things like that. Here it is: "Dumbledore sat down in his chair, a full day’s exhaustion kicking in. 'Sirius, medaling with the very fabric of time in space is something I discourage anyone from doing.'" "medaling" should be "meddling" in that paragraph. Just thought I'd let you know!

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 15:03
Chapter: Mere Minutes

Yay Sirius is back!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 02/18/06 14:57
Chapter: Behind the Veil

Trust Sirius to bust his way out of limbo. Even though James and Lily (was it them?) were waiting for him in the afterlife, he chose to go back to Harry. Good for him!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion
Date: 01/27/06 19:17
Chapter: All Was Right


Actually, that was the perfect ending. I don't think I could think of a better one. I can't believe it's all over. Yea though, I am so happy that Remus, Sirius and Harry are all so happy and living together! :sigh: This was the perfect story (except for J&L dying, but that's never changed...). Atleast Harry was able to meet his parents though.
Sirius is alive. That's how it should be. Why did J.K. have to kill him? Why can't she go along with your story... oh well. Well, congrats for finishing such a long story. I mean it, I have problems finishing and you kept with it. Kudos.
Well, I found something that I wanted to point out to you. their coking was eatable... I take it you meant to put cooking right? That's all I could really find that looked wrong to me. I'm not good at find such stuff.
Well, it was lovely following along with your story. Shame it has to end.
See you,
10/10 :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind comments throughout my story! It was always fun to see a review from you and I hope I was able to live up to the expectations you wanted. Once again, thanks :D

Reviewer: RobinIsley
Date: 01/21/06 12:13
Chapter: All Was Right

AMazing story, I've just finished reading. I really like it that harry's now finally happy and that he has both Remus and Sirius. Are you going to write a sequel? I'd love that! RI

Reviewer: LupinLover88
Date: 12/24/05 22:28
Chapter: Behind the Veil

Hey!!! Okay, so I'm reading like the fifth chapter I think? I like the idea of bringing Lily and James back, but like Dumbledore said messing with time that's not good!!! I wouldn't encourage it either!

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 12/17/05 14:37
Chapter: All Was Right

that was such a perfect ending for one of the most amazing fanfics ive ever read. i loved the writing style and the plot progressed at just the right speed. well done you!

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 14:20
Chapter: Like A Sister

well im guessing that volies a bit shook up with the prior incantation thing and that harry cut him lol anyways 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 13:48
Chapter: Interlude 3: Cry For Him

hmm why dosen't she say they need to no they deserve to know anyways 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 13:37
Chapter: Five Minutes Ago

SHITE hogwarts 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 13:17
Chapter: You're Not My Son

great chapter where the hell r james and lupin seriosuly anyways 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 12:41
Chapter: It Was Worth It

Great chapter 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/04/05 12:08
Chapter: For Once

lol finally anyways 10/10 great chapter

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