This was beautiful. I'm almost crying. It even looked like the way it was supposed to be. It's all according to the books, it seams real... I don't know if I am making sense at all but still.. haha
I loved it.
Beautiful.
-Ronnie
wow...that was good.
I liked how you explained everything in that fic, how Sirius felt when he found out they were dead, why he didn't trust Remus and the emotions that drove Sirius to hunt down Peter.
I think you depicted Sirius well, there was a lot of different emotions going on here and you showed all of them.
The only thing I can say is that from PoA, I think that Sirius went looking for Peter, realised in wasn't in hiding, and then went to Godric's Hollow. Although I think it's great you got Remus in there.
Brilliant! I'm not a Remus/Lily kind of person but you made it work. Well done! =D It was wonderfully written.
This is such a wonderful story, Ive read a while ago and forgot to review :( But now, I came across it again and I had to review so here I am reviewing! great story *hugs*
~Claire
Okeydoke. Made me cry there.
Excelent story, keep up the good work.
OK, you just made me cry. Well done.
That was amazing. There is no other word for it.
I'm going to go away and cry and feel inferior now.
I thought your Fan Fiction was ok , im looking for sum in put on my story i hope it gets to be in the public eye . Anything you can say to help me write better is nice! The title is "Summer Before Hogwarts"
I thought your Fan Fiction was ok , im looking for sum in put on my story i hope it gets to be in the public eye . Anything you can say to help me write better is nice! The title is "Summer Before Hogwarts"
I thought your Fan Fiction was ok , im looking for sum in put on my story i hope it gets to be in the public eye . Anything you can say to help me write better is nice! The title is "Summer Before Hogwarts"
Well all in all pretty good. You had a few missed spelled words but nothing damaging. Good Job
OMG this stoy was full of so much emotion.....I feel like crying....*shiver* your a great auther....
Best Dark/Angsty I ever hoped to have read! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! Write more! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease????
This story really seems like it's exacatacaly (yes, i wrote that on purpose) what would have happened in the real books. You rock!
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:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) I loved it! (I hope this review isn't too weird :P )
brillent keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you!
I LOVED it yep yep yep.Best one I've read in a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
