Reviews For Hold Me Once
Reviewer: CicelLuvsyew4Eva
Date: 05/30/06 20:34
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

UGH!! I HATE CLIFFY'S!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: CicelLuvsyew4Eva
Date: 05/30/06 19:34
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

I love this story!! and forst chapters should always make good impressions and this one makes a GREAT first impression...Keep writing!
Cicel

Reviewer: achp
Date: 05/16/06 12:18
Chapter: Under the Moon and Stars

well, it's really fun... but the kissing and stuff seems.. too soon.. but i love the harry and hermione thing so that's ok! we can do much better than that do we?! keep it up!

Reviewer: hermione davi
Date: 05/15/06 11:31
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

please please continue with this amazing history!!!! love it T_T

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 05/02/06 15:10
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

you haven't updated in forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 05/02/06 15:09
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

you haven't updated in forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: xBLUE_x
Date: 04/16/06 23:43
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

When is Chapter 10 coming up? I am seriously wanting to know! =)

Author's Response: it's coming out...soon. fyi this is the last chapter. i can't stand this story any more. no really after all those harsh reviews then the new couples of HBP. then the mods taking forever to look at the chapters. there's a 20% that i might continue.

Reviewer: hermionestwin77
Date: 04/03/06 18:36
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

Please Please Please PLEASE update soon i love this story!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I PROMISE! this weekend. stupid school, sucks being in the hardest school in the state. uhh...fyi this MIGHT be the last chapter. i'm not sure, i won't leave you guys on a cliffhanger or anything, but if i end it, you don't have to worry about it ending at an important part.

Reviewer: johnyt23
Date: 03/31/06 15:30
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

OMG your story is AMAZING!!! please keep writing!!!!

Author's Response: i FINALLY got a reply from the mods, i somehow have mistakes, i'll deal with it when i get on my computer

Reviewer: johnyt23
Date: 03/31/06 15:28
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

OMG your story is AMAZING!!! please keep writing!!!!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/28/06 15:47
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

okay i just read the story AFTER the first chapter and i realized, hmm maybe you did take there criticism because it got way better and ok fine, I am admit it I love this story and you need to update

Author's Response: yea, i only took the criticism of the people who actually TALKED about my story. thanks

Reviewer: fanofastar
Date: 03/28/06 11:15
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

pleeeeeeaaaaaaaase update!!!!! 4 god's sake, have some mercy!!

Author's Response: the mods still haven't even looked ONCE at this chapter. i'm already half way done with the chapter after the one i handed to the mods

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/27/06 15:57
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

I think I may just delete this from my favorites after reading your response to those people who gave you constructive criticism..you didn't have to curse them out now did you? After reading this story again those people were right. It is too rushed! And GOOD authors take all kinds of advice, good or bad because that is how you keep readers. And your losing one now.

Author's Response: yea, but here's the thing those people didn't even read the story, and were just saying crap about me

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/27/06 15:45
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

OMG! Do not keep us waiting any longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Was Hermione put under the Imperius curse by Grant?

Reviewer: silverstag
Date: 03/25/06 13:05
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

oh man,that is an awesome story.please continue.

Author's Response: i will i will

Reviewer: hplover21
Date: 03/24/06 19:25
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

That was such and awsome chapter... I'm so anxious so know what happens, please put the next chapter up soon, but dont feel rushed, take your time...

Author's Response: it's done and i already handed it in TWICE! i'm getting kinda mad now

Reviewer: annependragon
Date: 03/21/06 7:59
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

Oh you have me sitting on pins and needles here. OH this is a cliffie if there ever was one.

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 03/21/06 6:28
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

Did i flame you?IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR Sorry.I just had a spartz attack.Will you please forgive me?Youve got my intrest for hitting below the belt.Most H/Hr shippers would back down but you showed guts so i apluade you.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: fanofastar
Date: 03/20/06 3:27
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

4 god's sake, pleeaassee hurry. i can't wait to read your story. it's fantastic!!

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 03/19/06 22:07
Chapter: So Long and Goodnight

PPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR HARRY TO GET MALFOY!! HA! HA! P.S. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

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