Reviews For Hold Me Once
Reviewer: Dracosbooticall
Date: 06/01/05 19:55
Chapter: Welcome,Welcome!

Awww... I like Ron with Luna. Again, good chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Dracosbooticall
Date: 06/01/05 19:48
Chapter: Love is Not Always Nice

Another great chapter. A bit OOC but it's ok. I never really care about that. ;)

Reviewer: Dracosbooticall
Date: 06/01/05 19:04
Chapter: Under the Moon and Stars

Good 2nd chapter! I really like this story but very jealous of Hermione! I'm not a big fan of her! Great story! ;)

Reviewer: DannieR_luver
Date: 06/01/05 18:46
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

This chapter is awesome, plenty of romance! But plz get back to the actuall story. I still give it a 20.

Reviewer: Dracosbooticall
Date: 05/31/05 21:45
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

Hey, chapter one was good. btw, thanks for reviewing my story. I do agree with some of Vader's points but i do know that stories always improve as they go on. I'm not a big HP/HG fan but i like this one. I'll try to review every chapter.

Author's Response: Thaks for reviewing and I LOVE ur story by the way. It is awesome. Update some. I'll probably update in a week or so.

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 05/27/05 10:58
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

Please hurry and update more of your story because it's really good!

Author's Response: Don't worry I'll update in a week or so. This weekend I'll probably write a chapter or two because it's a long weekend. So peace out!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/27/05 9:13
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

Oh this chapter was so cute! Im soooooo glad you updated! :)this is one of my fav. stories.. Keep up the great work. 10/10 :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad that I'm one of your favorite stories. Don't worry I'll update in a week or so. This weekend I'll probably write a chapter or two because it's a long weekend. So peace out!

Reviewer: MidnightJewel
Date: 05/26/05 19:57
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

I liked this chapter and it flows nicely with the rest of your story. You're right, the tittle connects perfectly with the chapter ( the snogging parts). Poor Harry must have felt alot of pain, though. 10

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It has been a while since I received reviews! I actually did this chapter in one seating. It just came to me one day that I should do a chapter about Hermione's birthday just like I did for Harry!

Reviewer: Geekchic
Date: 05/26/05 18:43
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

OMG! I so agree w/ Cloudybear (but then again,I always do!) This story is awesome! Love love loev it! Plz update soon! 10/10

Author's Response: Just as I told Cloudybear, I'll orbably update in a week or so. Thanks for your review! Just curious, do you personally know Cloudybear? Anyway, thanks!

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 05/26/05 14:08
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

I'll give you all 10 reviews, just don't give up on this story. Please....I love it too much. It's the best. PLEASE keep going!

Author's Response: Awww... thanks so much. I'm glad that you enjoy my story. Don't worry, give me a week or so and I'll put in chapter 8.

Reviewer: allysonpotter
Date: 05/25/05 17:01
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

aww that is so cute i cant wait to see wht happens next. please write more and fast. i love cannt wait for more. 10/10

Author's Response: I just updated chapter seven so it would be a week or so before chapter 8. I just decided about having a romance chapter!

Reviewer: Geekchic
Date: 04/30/05 14:45
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON PLZNTHX! It was sooo cute! Cant wait for the next chapter! Nice spin on the Dolohov spell!

Reviewer: runawaygryffin
Date: 04/27/05 15:09
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

good chapter yet again. the only thing bad i would have to say about it is that u could make the chapters a bit longer, and maybe put a little more detail into it. other wise it was very good

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 04/27/05 14:25
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

very cute. i liked. update asap plz

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/26/05 15:52
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

2nd Reveiw!! i love this story, its sooo cute! plz keep writing! Rating:10 like usual :)

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 04/26/05 15:47
Chapter: Defensa de Amor

1st review! Indeed, twas TOO long since the last update. I reviewed. I've done my part. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Reviewer: Inspireroflove9191
Date: 04/26/05 15:29
Chapter: My Wish Comes True

I just wanted to see if I was able to contact myself! Any way, to all my fans thank you for reading my story I love you guys. Remember this story is dedicated to my Inspiration who I can never forget! HARRY AND HERMIONE FOREVER!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/25/05 20:08
Chapter: Unexpected Shocks

umm, good but short ;)... they BROKE UP! aww, i hope they can fix it, i thought harry should have told her! great story like usual :) but one tiny little thing : on the first day they usually have tons of homework, but no big! Rating:9

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/25/05 20:04
Chapter: Welcome,Welcome!

Tyler Black? if he is related to Sirius it should be a real Black Family name, no offense or anything!:) Ron with Looney lovegood(lol)!!! thats suprising..but suprises are good!Good chapter, but short..R=6

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/25/05 19:57
Chapter: Love is Not Always Nice

I happen to disagree, i think they could be like that, and i enjoy a lovey story (but thats my opinion).. can't wait to read the next chapter! R: of course 10 *'s P.S. Do you write author's notes for every reveiw?

Author's Response: No, I don't respond to every review but since you brought up the topic I'm writing back to you! Thanks for the reviews any way. Since you were wondering about Tyler Black, he is really the name of one of my friends in school. (I'm Sirius (lol)). I didn't decide what I'll do with him but he is important.

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