wow is all i can truly say to describe the beauty and passion of this sad sad tale

Aww! That was a sweet story! I was nearly in tears! Fantastic writing!

What a sad and beautiful story. I loved every sentence of it! The beginning was great and your descriptions during the wedding reception scene were superb.

"It's beautiful out here," she whispered.

"Yes," Harry replied softly, staring into his wife's eyes intently, "it certainly is."

Your description up to this point was already fabulous and created a wonderful atmosphere, but these two lines of simple dialogue captured the mood even more perfectly. I don’t know why, but the simple words they use here in contrast to the rather elaborate picture your description paints made the atmosphere seem even more real and tangible.

I like how Ron doesn’t leave Hermione alone on such a painful day, but tries to help her deal with the loss of Harry, even though he himself is still trying to deal with it. Dancing with Hermione next to her and Harry in her pensieve must have been hard on him, seeing Harry alive in her memories and yet knowing that he is dead can’t have been easy, but it shows what a great friend Ron is and how strong his friendship with Hermione and Harry is.

The night air was absolutely perfect. There was not a cloud in the sky, and hundreds of tiny candles emitted a warm glow apon the wedding guests smiling faces.

There’s a small typo in this sentence, ‘absolutely’ is spelled with the ‘e’ after the ‘t’. Then in the second sentence it should be ‘upon’, not ‘apon’ that word doesn’t exist as far as I know.

During their seventh year, Hermione and her close friends said 'I love you' to each other almost everyday. It became a natural thing for them to say to each other…

Maybe this is just me, but I find it really hard to picture Ron, Harry and Hermione saying ‘I love you’ to each other all the time. It sure shows how friendship can grow into real love when Harry suddenly changes the words slightly, but I find it a bit hard to believe.

"Hey," Ron said quietly as he saw her eyes open. "How are you doing?" he asked cautiously. He knew this was her first anniversary without Harry.

I feel the last sentence of this paragraph is slightly redundant. Of course Ron would know that it’s their anniversary and with Harry dead for only a few months I don’t think he could forget either that or that Hermione is alone on the anniversary.

I didn’t mean to sound like I didn’t like your story, because I honestly did. It’s very emotional and made me incredibly sad, but your writing is also very beautiful!

Ok.....that started out H/Hr and kinda ended up R/Hr. KInda cheesy.

I don't ship H/Hr, but that was so cute...it was so well-written. Good job!

i'm crying....that was so sweet....and i don't usually read h/hr fics at all...but that was so good...

that was great! i creid because it was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awww.. that's soooo sad!! great story!

Wow! I was a bit surprised when this was a memory. What a beautiful lament! You captured her sadness well.

this is so touching! i love the imagery. i don't see how you'd be able to continue this, but if you think of any way, please do!