More, More, More, ahhh I love this story. As I say in all my reviews, Excellent job and keep up the good work.
I love it, yet again...Excellent job. Evil Harry is still in him, I can taste it. It's all in his blood. I can't wait for the squeal!!
I LOVE THE FAST UPDATES !! I JUST READ UR OTHER STORIES AND THEY ARE ALL REALLY REALLY GREAT!!!! PLEASE HAVE ANOTHER ONE SOON!!
wow!!! i love this story! i can't wait to find out what happens at the end! keep up the good work!
Great chapter! I must say though that I'm extremely disappointed in little Ginny Weasley. I'm suprised Harry isn't as well. But, I guess, stuck with a secret that big, then hearing that other prophecy, would make anyone that loves Harry go screaming to Dumbledore. I'm curious to know about the Potter Family Darkness. I hope one day the diaries return to Harry, possibly the sequel? Anyways, great chapter! Keep up the great work! I'm so glad you're updating so quickly! I hate waiting for this story because it's so addicting!
*shaking in anger* TWO! TWO? ONLY TWO CHAPPIES!!!???!!!???!!! Brill story, love it!
Bra-vo, but James is................................................................ dead. There I said it, SHOOT ME!!!!!!!
im slightly scared now! is harry turning into an alcaholic? lol this is really good keep it up! :D
You're a really good writer.. but in your 'A/N' you said that there were only a few more chapters left. Unless you're going to write a sequel.. I think you should write more about how Harry works hard to regain the trust of his friends and the Order again- I mean, it's kind of weird to have people trusting Harry immediately just after he has turned into a Death Eater, isn't it? It was kind of his own descision although Voldemort must have put all that anger in him... Write more about how Harry's feeling, write about how Harry(this is what I feel) knows that he has made a very big mistake and knows that he cannot simply apologise but must prove through his actions that he is on the good side. Don't end this so quickly by just saying 'Everybody had given Harry a second chance and he was determined to prove himself' or something like that, I think it's bad. Leave the 'Final Showdown' part to later..better still stop this story when Harry regains the Order's and Dumbledore's trust, and put the 'Final Showdown' in a sequel. Or don't write about the 'Final Showdown' at all is also fine, this story can stand by its own and is good enough to stand by its own anyway.
Author's Response: no one is really giving Harry a second chance, Harry hasn't earned everyones trust yet. He's still followed and never left alone for long. As I replied to the last review, things may seem a little rushed but that is because I have a sequel planned that will bring Harry's feelings about himself and his feelings towards his actions to a whole new light. I already have part of it written. Things that aren't resolved or things that seem forgotten about in this story will be amplified in the next. Keep an eye out for it and thanks for the review. :)
First, well done. You have a typo, it's Lily EvAns. I also want to say that I am not sure a few more chapters would be enough....... I really like this fic, it would be awsome if you continued for a while, instead of rushing the climax and end like lots of others...... I love your work, so keep it up!!!!!! 10/10
Author's Response: Yes I know it feels like I'm rushing things, but I made a promise to myself that I wouldn't go over 25 chapters for this story as I have a sequel planned. Many things that aren't resolved in this story will be in the sequel, I actually have some of it written. Thanks for the review and keep an eye out for the sequel, as soon as the last chapter is finished here. :)
This is great! If all the books in the world were this good, there wouldn't be a bad book anywhere! Wow!!! Keep on doing a great job!
Awww... Well, I'm glad Harry's here! And he's so understanding and brave and he stands up for what he believes in (like him killing old Voldie, for one)... haha... :) Can't wait for Chapter 23!!! Great work! Superb, really! Brilliant! Spectacular! Splendid!
Weee! YAYness! Harry's BACK! The world is SAVED!!!!! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
How sad! I really like how Harry feels about his father, he respects his decision to stay hidden. This is a really good story. You've portrayed his emotions and lack of emotions well. I love how Ginny doesn't question his motives, doesn't rat him out. I always love her character and I think you've done a good job portraying her to JKR's standards. I hope the next chapter updates soon! I'm anxious to read more! I love this story!
Awesome story, I'm loving it. I love how Harry explored Dark Magic and suffered for doing so. It has made him even more determined to kill Voldemort and you showed that extremely well. Great story, keep it up.
I'm so sad there's only a few more chapters left!!! I love this story so much, it's so deep, so... I don't know, just the emotions you portray are so strong, you just get sucked into the story. I really like it a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter to update!
WoohOO!! wow, that was a hard chapter. Dumbledore was so mad at him... I'm glad Harry's so determined to kill voldemort
BOO YA!!!!!! FIGHT THE POWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's better. This fic was off my favourites list because Harry was a DE!!! But, seeing as he quit, GO YOU!!!!! IT'S BACK ON!!!!!!!!
Wow, that was a nice chapter. I loved this fic, and then I fell out of step with it, but now I'm back in there! Please update soon!