Reviewer: Wind Walker
Date: 12/05/05 0:12
Chapter: And Life Goes On

Wow...I can't believe it's over! =( But you can bet that I'll be one of the people reading the sequal. You wrote this fic brilliantly, and it was so good that it deserves to be one of the books in the actual Harry Potter series. Great job, and keep writing more like this!

Reviewer: Millsie
Date: 12/04/05 23:26
Chapter: And Life Goes On

Excellent story and final chapter. I look forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: andy
Date: 12/04/05 19:08
Chapter: Fallen Hero

This is the BEST story I have read so far so PLEASE update now!!

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 12/04/05 13:30
Chapter: Lost

Well....this story was a bit much for me, with Harry turning Death Eater and all, but otherwise, it was a very good story, I can't wait for the sequel, you're a geat writer, keep writing.

Reviewer: sexymink
Date: 12/03/05 20:47
Chapter: Lost

Love the story its the best one i've read. Please update soon and let us know what the sequel is going to be called so i can look for it.

Reviewer: kittyandlulu
Date: 12/01/05 23:33
Chapter: Fallen Hero

I love this story i cant wait for u to update!

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 11/30/05 23:38
Chapter: Fallen Hero

very nice. i can't believe they would give harry the demontors kiss without a trial, considering who he is...... then again..... very nice, and i am bery pleased u r making a sequel. keep it up!

Reviewer: Lonly Lupin
Date: 11/30/05 16:58
Chapter: Fallen Hero

wow this is great please make a happy ending if it doesnt ruin your plot oh this chapters brilliant

Reviewer: HPObsession21
Date: 11/30/05 12:41
Chapter: Fallen Hero

This story is amazing. I keep coming back everyday to see if you have updated and when I see that you do, nothing else matters until I read the newly added chapter(s). Thanks for writing such a great story and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 11/29/05 10:10
Chapter: Fallen Hero

This is SUCH a good story! I love the way Harry escapes, hee hee hee, DIE LUMINOUS!!! HA HA HA!!!!!!!! Soz......... ONE MORE CHAPPIE????? At least there is gonna be a sequel...

Reviewer: dragondance
Date: 11/28/05 14:56
Chapter: Fallen Hero

This story has a lot of great twists and turns! Very entertaining to read. Update again soon, and I can't wait for the sequel!!

Reviewer: Professor Weasley
Date: 11/28/05 14:30
Chapter: Fallen Hero

OMG, I loved this chapter. Well of course who doesn't!!!? Anyways I never got the way Voldemort got Harry to Diagon Ally. And when did Luminous get the Minister of Magic job? Or was that in the beginning, must have been. Other than my confusion it was excellent. I hope Harry kills that git after all he's done. Bad Voldemort!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Voldemort made Harry's projection real, just to give you a clue of how powerful Voldemort has become, he made Harry be in two places at the same time. Luminous at the beginning introduces himself as the Minister of Magic. :)

Reviewer: Adami
Date: 11/28/05 14:14
Chapter: Fallen Hero

Wow, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: auror_girl
Date: 11/28/05 13:45
Chapter: Fallen Hero

GO KID!!!! snape seems less evil than usual! is harry still any where near hogwarts?

Author's Response: he's still in Scotland, you find out exactly where in the sequel.

Reviewer: Hesperia
Date: 11/28/05 7:33
Chapter: Fallen Hero

You know, I never trusted Luminous, from the very beginning... Great chapter.

Reviewer: Wind Walker
Date: 11/28/05 6:18
Chapter: Fallen Hero, I'm fine now. This is GREAT! I can't wait for the next chapter and then the sequal! You have a real knack for writing, keep on doing it!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 11/27/05 20:15
Chapter: Fallen Hero

Hm... interesting! I can't wait for the last chapter and the sequel! I wanna see Harry kill the git sooooo bad!! Then, he needs to go back to his friends! Anyways, I love it!

Reviewer: Fading_Hollow
Date: 11/27/05 18:27
Chapter: Fallen Hero

Good show! You have a lot of great ideas, and a beautiful talent. Can't wait for the last chapter and I'll definetly read the sequal. That story is just awesome...

Reviewer: Salina43
Date: 11/27/05 18:15
Chapter: Fallen Hero

YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY! wow, what an exit..... Very dramatic, I love it. Poor Harry... ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER? :( can't wait for the sequel though. Have you decided what you're going to call it?

Reviewer: Wind Walker
Date: 11/25/05 23:06
Chapter: To The Future!

Bwah! This is wonderful!!! I think it's better than the 6th book (I was a bit dissapointed in that one)! PLEASE keep on working on it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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