This story was beautiful. It made me cry.
That's a wonderful story. I like the way everyone says their prayers, and the way good finally triumphs over evil, and voldemort is finally defeated.
that was really good how u made me imagine harry fighting and ron praying at the same time.
hiii . . . this is pretty cool!!! I thought the whole battle b/w Voldemort and Harry passed a little two quickly, though!
Author's Response: Hi! It is pretty cool, huh? Yeah, the battle was a little too quick, but oh well! Thanks!
This is really sad and I could just see the bit where Ron was saying the prayer and the scenes from the battle being a film. It definately painted a picture in my mind. I would say that Harry and Hermione and Ron all seemed a bit too mature in their words, even if there wasa war going on.
Author's Response: It came out as a picture in my mind too. I'm glad that you were able to see my story playing in your head. It makes me feel as if I am a good writer. Thank you for reviewing.