this is a great story and i like the idea of hermione trying to get harry to notice her its funny and true to the hermione would do it. This does deserve more then 10 about 15
OMG that is a great story please update soon!
OMG that is a great story please update soon!
Phenomenal story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
LOL! Wonderful updates! My stomach churned for them when they almost kissed; I could definitely feel the emotion. And I LOVED the way you ended this most recent chapter! Very cute. They're both relatively in character (Ron is too, for that matter) which is great. I do like how they've yet to get together. I hate rushed stories. It's important to get your readers emotionally invested in your characters, and I think you're doing a fantastic job of that. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!
Too cute. When is the next chapter? Can't wait.
Nice progression on Harry's part, hes fiiiiiiiinally coming around! YAY!! Darnit ron and his snoring! W00T for the almost makeout session!!!
very well written and very cute! keep writing, i cant wait to read more! great job!
AWE SO CLOSE! I can't wait for the next chapter. This story rocks. Keep it up!
KirstiR u r teasing us they were sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo close DARN U RONALD WEASLEY!!!!!lol anyway great fic u r a great wroter u shud consider being an author
One of the best romantic fan-fiction stories that I have read. I am thoroughly enjoying this story, and I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
Bravo! I personly think JK Rowling would be proud of this. THis is not as good as hers but pretty close. Update soon.
AWESOME!!!!! SCHWEET!!!!!! TOTALLY COOL!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Please update soon.
Great story! You definitely have me hooked! Keep on writing and I hope you update soon.
You have me hooked! Updates are my favorite kind of days.
I love this chapter 100%!!! Please update soon!!! It was bloody brilliant!!(and funny)
WOW really good story update soon.
I really like it how you made Harry start to notice what Hermoine is doing. And I LOVE this story!!!!! It is totally Awesome!!!!
It was good. Can't wait for the next phase.
You've got me hooked! Very well written and flows nicely. A tad bit condescending towards guys, but that's to be expected. I enjoy your style, please update soon.