Reviews For Into The Unknown
Reviewer: LadyOblivious
Date: 03/22/11 7:50
Chapter: Chapter 2

AWESOME! Love this story

Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 12/13/07 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 2

Wow... That was very confusing...

Reviewer: happy_emo
Date: 04/26/07 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 2

more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: happy_emo
Date: 04/14/07 18:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

wow totally cool, ferret, funny. totally awsome update soon!

Reviewer: Hostile 17
Date: 02/13/07 21:21
Chapter: Chapter 2

Thank you for updating. Love the story so far, please update soon! :D

Reviewer: Hostile 17
Date: 01/22/07 16:45
Chapter: Chapter 2

Love it. Well, I love all Tom/Hermione stories, but this one is very good...

Reviewer: Hostile 17
Date: 01/18/07 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

YES! Another Tom/Hermione story!

Reviewer: Starlight23
Date: 01/18/07 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very nice, very nice. Short, to the point, tidy, well written. I liked it very much. Keep up the good work. ~Bonnie

Reviewer: megmo85
Date: 01/04/07 10:57
Chapter: Chapter 2

Good start. Looking foward to reading where this is headed. It is kind of confusing but I have a feeling that it is suppossed to be. Can't wait for an update:)

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/28/06 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 2

First of all, wonderful start! I’m looking forward to seeing where this story will go. The first chapter had zip and verve. I liked the fact that Hermione’s Achilles heel here was the library. Nicely ironic. Are we going to find out why she was out after hours in the Restricted Section? What is the nature of the room she stumbled into accidentally? Sounds intriguing.

Chapter two was a bit rough around the edges, as you mentioned in the authors note. It still had nice punch, and kept the reader interested. I liked the little touches (such as Tom’s ‘dentist-poster-boy-teeth’ and the ‘familiar blond ferret.’) One thing I noticed is that Professor Dumbledore calls her ‘Ms. Granger’ before she has corrected the misconception that her name is ‘Gran-.’ Two lines later he calls her as ‘Miss Gran-.’ Was that intentional?

I was a little more then surprised when Dumbledore appointed her head girl. It didn’t make any sense. She dropped out of the blue today and might be gone tomorrow for all he knows, right? Or does he actually know who she is? It seems like he knows something mysterious that nobody else does, but what is it? I’m dying to know.

Anyway, I like your story. Bravo! Please keep updating.

Pax.

Reviewer: icevanilla3
Date: 12/13/06 3:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Jeez where is the rest of this great story?

Author's Response: *blush* Chapter 2 is up! I hope you like it. :)

Reviewer: SmileZ
Date: 10/15/06 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh. Why did you leave it there? Please update soon! I ADORE TR. He is so freakin' HOT! (drools)

Author's Response: lol! I absolutely agree.

Reviewer: mindini
Date: 06/17/06 7:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

hurrrrrrryyyyyy upppppppppppp wiith the next cccchaaaaaaaaaapppter now you could make hermione the reason he goes nearly evil

Author's Response: Next chapter up..who knows what will happen..(well, I guess I do know) :P

Reviewer: Pandee
Date: 05/14/06 10:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

What??? how can you end it there?? i did really like it though.

Author's Response: Thanks! I decided to continue it...:P

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 02/10/06 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think you've got a lot of forward motion with this, and I hope you pick it up again. I liked seeing an adventurous side to Hermione, instead of keeping her nose glued to the books like she is in a lot of fan fiction. I'm interested to see her actually fall for Tom Riddle - he's such an interesting character!

Author's Response: Definitely, one of the main reasons why I decided to write about him...I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: animal_lover_
Date: 11/03/05 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooh, now theres a combination u dont see every day! continue the story!

Author's Response: *smile*

Reviewer: xLiFEerasedx
Date: 10/22/05 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmm.. interesting. =) Please continue!

Author's Response: I'll try...I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: stuckonyou
Date: 08/24/05 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

i cant wait to see what happens. i have been waiting forever for an update so update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your patience! Though, I'm not too proud of it, I hope you like chapter 2!

Reviewer: bIsHiE_hUnTa
Date: 08/12/05 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cool! Hope you continue on quickly^^

Author's Response: :P

Reviewer: Chrissa
Date: 07/19/05 2:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh.. hahaha ive read this a million times but i 've had probs loggin in so anyway i 've been meaning to tell you this, i reckon that your story is starting off really well and i am begging you to keep updating... and faster!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Alas, real life gets in the way..., but I will try! :)

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