Reviewer: MoonyLupin
Date: 03/29/05 11:33
Chapter: The End

...to the point (the poem)...a bit of a shocker created by the rhyme...like, it made you read faster and faster which conveyed the "arrrgh!" tone. Awesomeness!

Author's Response: Lol, you're funny. Yay! Awesomeness!

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 03/28/05 2:49
Chapter: The End

That was good! Simple, but very effective.

Author's Response: Simplicity is a vertue! (So is spelling. Not that I can spell...)

Author's Response: *virtue. God I don't deserve reviews when I can't even spell.

Reviewer: Voldemort rocks
Date: 03/26/05 7:48
Chapter: The End

That was so much better then the poems then i write about old voldie, You have a gift for poetry and writing

Author's Response: :):)I love all my lovely reviewers:):)

Reviewer: Voldemort rocks
Date: 03/26/05 7:48
Chapter: The End

That was so much better then the poems then i write about old voldie, You have a gift for poetry and writing

Author's Response: Naa, your poems r good! Thanx for saying I have a gift for writing! I'm rlly excited at the moment because I'm becomung a journalist on my school magazine! It's not much, but least it's a start. :) Thanx for reviewing!

Reviewer: the_queen_bee
Date: 03/24/05 12:54
Chapter: The End

Claire that was crap (don't worri ppl, I know her so I can insult her) Noway near as good as your usual excellency, I am awaiting a piece of work that is actually decent, or I will refuse to ever read your stuff again. I am evil.

Author's Response: We know you are evil okay? And insane. Mwahhahahaha. And remember, I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!!!!

Reviewer: slytheringal
Date: 03/16/05 11:40
Chapter: The End

Cool! Liked the format, quite different to the stuff I write... Not that many people write about Voldemort. Is this set after the second war?

Author's Response: I'm seeing double XS

Reviewer: slytheringal
Date: 03/16/05 11:40
Chapter: The End

Cool! Liked the format, quite different to the stuff I write... Not that many people write about Voldemort. Is this set after the second war?

Author's Response: It's set around OotP time. tanx 4 reviewing

Reviewer: GwenSandyhill
Date: 03/12/05 20:30
Chapter: The End

wow, so powerful............*shivers* It's amazing, almost the kind of thing J. K. herself might write! It gave me the shivers (This is a good thing -- powerful writing)

Author's Response: I can't believe someone actually likes it. I'm in a v.good mood now.

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 03/10/05 15:45
Chapter: The End

I did read, and I read it again, and again. Simply because, that was a great poem. So powerful, like Voldemort, but simple like a wave of a wand. I think this deserves a 10+++

Author's Response: Aw, thats really nice! Thanks!

Reviewer: Lumos
Date: 03/10/05 10:23
Chapter: The End

It was great! Simple but great - and simplicity can sometimes be a virtue.

Author's Response: Lol! Thanks, I didnt spend too much time writing this. The idea just popped into my head when I was doing English Homework and I had to get it down.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/03/05 11:29
Chapter: The End

Now, how did I do that? I hate it when that happens...

Author's Response: Tehehe, I don't mind, now I have three reviews instead of one!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/03/05 11:28
Chapter: The End

I have read, and so, like an honorable member of mugglenet, I shall review. Lovely poem, the rhythm was kept all the way through. I think you might need a comma in between broken and tears, I feel it would smooth the flow - but it's up to you. Great writing!

Author's Response: Be Honorable like Zetera! Review!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/03/05 11:27
Chapter: The End

I have read, and so, like an honorable member of mugglenet, I shall review. Lovely poem, the rhythm was kept all the way through. I think you might need a comma in between broken and tears, I feel it would smooth the flow - but it's up to you. Great writing!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Btw, I need some advice, my local area is doing a poetry competition and the best ones will be published in a book. Do you reckon I should edit this one so it isn't Harry Potter related and give it in? I can't decide wether to do something different or not.

Author's Response: I'm editing the change.

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