ooooo....good chapter.....i cant wait to see what happens next or what happens when they confess.....Update soon because i'll be watching!!!!
kool story write more write more :)
:) Sweet. You know what? I really like this story. Lol. Well, carry on. Dani
Ok, well I planned on reading only one chapter and then read the next chappies the next day (so i can go to sleep) but I got hooked! All your fault! It's now 11:54pm. Lol, j/k. It's not your fault, well it kind of is. I mean, because you wrote this. Anyways, I feel a little sorry for Harry. He has to go through the Sirius thing again and he doesn't have Ron and Hermione to be with him. INteREstInG! :) Well, carry on. Dani
OMG, you MUST add more soon, this is such a great story! Definitely one of the best I've read on Mugglenet. You're such a good humor/mystery writer!
Just read all of it and it's really good. Write more soon!
wow, that was a dark chappie but i really liked it! I love it how u keep it so realistic with the real characters, their feelings and the books. Is that snake bad in some way? i guess we'll find out in the following chapters! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!! (also, there's this really witty story called weasleys wizarding wheezes gone bad which i recoment...oh! would u look at that! its by me! lol! 10!)
Wow, this is the best story I've read on here! It's SO well-written, and the plot is wonderful. I also love how the grand-kids have similar characteristics of their grandparents. This last chapter even seemed like it would happen in the real book! Please continue with this soon! .:Hannah:. p.s. I'm adding this to my favorites list! :)
i just read your whole story and i think its really really good!!!!! i really enjoyed it and ill be waiting for more.....update soon
I really really love your plot - and wish I'd come up with it myself! 10/10! And I'd really like it if you'd review my stories... thanks!
dude, that is totally the best chapter yet! I love it! BTW, how long do you plan this to be? Just out of curiosity. But dude, this story kicks butt. It's awesome.
Author's Response: Right now it looks like it will be around fifteen chapters, give or take. Thanks for the compliment. :)
How dark! I like that Harry has been branded by Voldemort with the Dark Mark. It's a very cool idea. Great chapter, much darker than all of your others. The part that scared me the most was the memory of Lupin's corpse. Will you go into that further in a later chapter? Great job and please update soon!
This is a very interesting story. You have portrayed Harry as...Harry, just Harry, like so many other fanfic authors have failed to accomplish. Please continue soon!
I'm STILL trying to picture Harry as 66, he looks like some mutant form of my grandfather :P. Good story can't wait for the next chapter
I love this one sooo much! This has got to be one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Please keep writing!
Please write more the moment you get back to a computer! I really want to know what happens in the Pensieve! Great story, it's getting better with every update!
NOOOOOOOOOO Remus dies!!!! Anyway, back to the subject, very, very interesting concept, creative to say the least. Good job with it so far, I probably couldn't have done anything with that idea, but you're doing a fantasic job. Keep up the good work- but REMUS DIES!!!
That was SOOOOOOOO good! Bad Hermy, don't be so mean to Harry! lol I wonder what the memory ish, and I really wanna know what happened in his 7th year that he won't say! GRRRR!
I LUV THIS STORY CANT WAIT TO READ MORE REATE A 10!!!!!!!
You have a great story! A fantastic one if I can say! i find your language, grammar, and punctuation is very accurate. You have a really nice plot, with all of the characters, you know, grown up! It's real fun, and I hope it's fun for you to write something like that as well. It's always fun for me!