I think that it was v v v v good cause Snape is ya know, an EW kinda guy, but now I think he's a bit sad. Am I turning into a slytherin? %$@&! I'm a Gryffindor with Raja...(Remus John - and it's the word for king. Clever, huh? LMAO I'm raaaandom!)
Author's Response: To me Remy is Kow (King of the World), SEoU (Supreme Emperor of the Universe) and of course my husband. Sorry girls, he's taken!! Me, obsessed?
Aww, poor Severus. You succeeded in making me sad; I really liked it! However, I too feel that tis more of a monologue than a poem.
I have taken my medication before hand this time, so this is totally medication based. Love it.;
It wasn't really a poem apart from the fact it was in poem form. It didnt really have any rhythm to it. I think it was good but it would have been better as a monolouge in Dark/Angsty Fics. I'll give you an eight.
Well, you've certainly succeeded if you wanted to insult people! It was a good poem, but REALLY annoyed me!!!
It's a very strange poem that doesn't follow the usual format. Makes you think about it, and very different. Good!