Reviews For The Jump
Reviewer: ILoveRemus
Date: 04/29/05 6:34
Chapter: The Jump

I think that it was v v v v good cause Snape is ya know, an EW kinda guy, but now I think he's a bit sad. Am I turning into a slytherin? %$@&! I'm a Gryffindor with Raja...(Remus John - and it's the word for king. Clever, huh? LMAO I'm raaaandom!)

Author's Response: To me Remy is Kow (King of the World), SEoU (Supreme Emperor of the Universe) and of course my husband. Sorry girls, he's taken!! Me, obsessed?

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/17/05 20:35
Chapter: The Jump

Aww, poor Severus. You succeeded in making me sad; I really liked it! However, I too feel that tis more of a monologue than a poem.

Reviewer: ScabbersSaysSqueak05
Date: 03/15/05 9:44
Chapter: The Jump

I have taken my medication before hand this time, so this is totally medication based. Love it.;

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/02/05 14:36
Chapter: The Jump

It wasn't really a poem apart from the fact it was in poem form. It didnt really have any rhythm to it. I think it was good but it would have been better as a monolouge in Dark/Angsty Fics. I'll give you an eight.

Reviewer: imo
Date: 03/02/05 6:53
Chapter: The Jump

Well, you've certainly succeeded if you wanted to insult people! It was a good poem, but REALLY annoyed me!!!

Reviewer: LilmissBrit
Date: 03/02/05 6:42
Chapter: The Jump

It's a very strange poem that doesn't follow the usual format. Makes you think about it, and very different. Good!

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