Reviewer: Mind_Over_Matter
Date: 10/01/06 22:16
Chapter: The End (Finally)

It's about time I reviewed this story. Really. About time. Not to mention, I could have sworn I already had...
Anyway, enough excuses.

I really like this story. It's so unique - completely different to any other humour fanfic I've read, here or elsewhere. The only thing I think I would change is probably some of the more scary randomness - but even then, it's a part of the way the story goes, and the ending makes it completely justified.

I think one of the most memorable moments is when Lupin is trying to convince Ethan that it is not, in fact, an advantage that Ron's asleep when they're about to give a quiz on drills. It's that kind of humour that works best, in my opinion, in your story. All the characters have a slightly bent sense of logic (or, in cases such as Dudley, barely any sense of logic), and it just... works.

So well done - I just love yours sense of humour!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 09/17/06 15:19
Chapter: The End (Finally)

The s- ooon… no… s… sun… sun!! The sun s… sets… the sun sets in a blah… bla… blazz…. Blaze!!! Blaze!!! The sun sets in a blaze of fiery... um…”

Hmmm... that reminds me of the Kamikaze Scotsman sketch from Monty Python, where the guy are reading the "Book Before Bedtime" thing and can't sound it out properly... I'm too obsessed with Monty Python. Loved the ending!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 09/17/06 15:15
Chapter: A Dead And A Not So Dead Persons Are Back

“Wow! Aren’t werewolves those cute little animals that are so furry and adorable and lick you?” she asked, apparently thrilled.

“Erm… no,” Lupin admitted, trying to keep from getting frustrated. “They are humans that, on a full moon, transform into a terrible wolf that actively seeks human blood. They have no human mercies… they just kill. If one bites you, you become one of them.”

Was that inspired by the Monty Python thing about the man who wants to be a lion tamer, but gets lions confused with anteaters? Or maybe I'm just too obsessed with Python...

Reviewer: LoneWolfLoverGirl
Date: 08/29/06 11:45
Chapter: A Dead And A Not So Dead Persons Are Back

you are insane! In a good way.

Reviewer: Veggienapper
Date: 06/12/06 7:45
Chapter: The End (Finally)

OH GOD!!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!! I had to take a mensa test one time...must kill language arts teacher *twitch* *twitch*...evil! Anyways, I thought that Mrs. Drew would fall in love with Peter, you know how sexy-riffic he is, I mean HAWT!!! (that TWAS a JOKE!!!!)!

Shexxazonicmulipulclorosis...that rocks. I mean, really rocks...I worship this story. *kneels down and worships* All hail!!!!

Ethan seems like a character out of the Series of Unfortunate Events. One of those completely hilarious yet quirked out friendly ones. That also rock. God, am I obsessed with stones today, or what?

All in all, your stories should rule the universe!!!!


Author's Response: omg!! Sorry, I couldn't help but look at your bio after that lovely review, lol, and I saw that you liked MONTY PYTHON AND QUEEN!!! AHH!!! MY TWO FAVORITE THINGS!! They just go together, don't they? I could totally see Freddie Mercury and... oh crap, there's too many Monty Python characters to choose from... anyway... wow. I lost my point. Putting that behind, thank you very much! I love Ethan, I was thinking about putting him in my other stories too... hmm. Maybe I should. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HeirOfGryffindor
Date: 02/15/06 12:27
Chapter: The End (Finally)

Oh, yeah, definitely WAY random. It's the second-most-random thing I've ever read. The chapter in Harry's Our What??? with Frank Longbottom turning into a duck beat this one. It's awesome. 10!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 01/22/06 20:24
Chapter: The End (Finally)

You're right. this is the most random thing I've ever read. that's why it rocks. You and your stories and Monty Python are awsome (If we built a large wooden badger...) 417/10. really.

Author's Response: Awww thanks. lol, I love the wooden badger part.

Reviewer: Youth
Date: 01/22/06 17:05
Chapter: The End (Finally)


Reviewer: padfooot_emmy
Date: 01/22/06 10:04
Chapter: 10 Questions

omg i can not stop laughing i absolutly love how doese your mind do this kinnda stuff anyway i love it

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 12:16
Chapter: The End (Finally)

Lol being arrested for running Voldermort over lol i wish i couda seen that anyways great seriously random story 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 12:03
Chapter: A Dead And A Not So Dead Persons Are Back

tru the Frank Longbottum thing was helarious and the james confronting malfoy lol anyways 10/10 and im a bit confused on the whole cedric and Sirus thing why diden't they ask for Harry's perants that would have been interesting lol

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 11:51
Chapter: 10 Questions

shite dat was really seriously funny lol that whole chapter was done great and i loved the bit about the juggler lol God this really is the funniest Fan Fic eva lol 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 11:41
Chapter: Owl Delivery

You can't help but feel sorry for Dudly actually u can so 4gt it anyways 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 11:31
Chapter: Harry and Ron, the Dynamic Duo

Great Idea im sure Malfoy would love to be stuck in a Muggle Office with Harry and his Uncle thank God for Lupin bringing Ron but Lupin also brougth Malfoy im beggining to worry about him why would he do that oh well and anyways 10/10 great story i swear its the funniest iv ever read

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 11:24
Chapter: The Handsome, Amazingly Smart and Talented Remus Lupin!

Well i already know youv completed the story but i can stillhelp give conditions right RIGHT??? lol my condition would be that Uncle Vernon has to come to Hogwarts with Harry and would have to help Harry train for Quidtich, DA, DADA Oclumency and Lelligemency lol i can just imagen that hmmmm anyways 10/10

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 12/03/05 11:14
Chapter: No, Dudley, not a toaster!

*Raises hand in air and jumps up and down* Oh Oh i found it right here see it's not in the New dictionarrys or in the old ones its in the REALLY REALLY VERY VERY old Dictionary it means a desiese that infects extreamly irritating people in the fictional world of Harry Potter!!!! see told you anyways great chapter and i think that's 2 of ur stories that iv reviwed 2 day GO ME lol anyways agian 10/10 and im gona read the next chapter

Reviewer: moonlit fire
Date: 10/25/05 17:32
Chapter: The End (Finally)

Amazing! need i say more?

Reviewer: Sootyface
Date: 09/30/05 15:49
Chapter: The End (Finally)

You are completly insane. Its a good thing to know. Join me in the funny farm someday? ;) love the stori.

Author's Response: lol, thanks. Hopefully I'm expressing my randomness in the story so I don't have to in real life, therefore, not landing me in the insane asylum.

Reviewer: Professor_Lupin_Lover
Date: 09/12/05 19:12
Chapter: The End (Finally)

Great job, sorry I haven't looked in on this story yet... I had my friend over when I was reading the part about "You might have a problem during a full moon because..." and we stayed up half the night (she's a slow reader but a great friend) reading the rest and laughing. Great job, can't wait for the sequel to Harry's our WHAT??? I've been checking my faves everyday!

Author's Response: Thanks, I did always find this the most amusing of my stories. I'm glad someone looked it up. Sequel to Harry's Our WHAT??? will be up soon... keep your eyes peeled!

Reviewer: luinloriel
Date: 08/29/05 3:30
Chapter: The End (Finally)

the poor blood tester guy. i think he should get an order of merlin- first class for defeating Voldie. he shouldn't have been locked up. i'm gald you decided not to make Harry or Ron homosexual. it would have been just a little tooo random. i loved the cotton candy outfit. i think dudder's would look hilarious in it. was he wearing harry's purple socks? please write another one like it. did minerva like harry's essay?

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