Oh gosh...I wasn't expecting Snape...I was torn between Blaise and Malfoy, but that was definitely a nice twist. Not something you see all the time, but that makes it that much better.
Wonderful.
:^D
omgg i luv this one-shott
at first i thought this story was ginny/draco haha
i love the twistt
PLEASE UPDATE RIGHT UNDER HIS NOSE!! PLEASEE!!
Wow, you had me right to the end! Great storytelling. I totally thought it was Harry, Ginny and Malfoy! Loved it!
llloveed it
its exactly how i pictured snapes feelings for lily
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Brill story, great twist! I thought it was draco malfoy.... it was really well written as well!
I adored it! My jaw nearly hit the floor when I read the end, nice twist!
Oooohhhhh!!!!!!! I loved the twist! It is so rarely done! Severus in love with Lily. That has the appeal of HG/DM. I thought it was Draco who liked Ginny, but you did a wonderful job! I am also a reader of Right Under His Nose, which I also LOVE! I shall quit so I can go back to reading Right Under His Nose!!!! ( :
Very ingenious twist.Up till the end, I thought that the main characters in the fic were Draco and Ginny.
I LOVED THIS ONE!! I kinda figured out it was Snape when he didn't mention Voldemort. It so..idk how i thiought it should be lol
whew you had me scared for a sec, i really hate d/g shippers. till next time tah!
whew you had me scared for a sec, i really hate d/g shippers. till next time tah!
Hey! I was checking out your other stories, while Right Under His Nose updated!! Totally LOVE the twist!! hehehehe....
Good twist, but why was Ginny in That class? So Malfoy has feelings........
I love this story! At first I didn't like it, because I thought it was Draco/Ginny. When I realized it's Snape/Lily, I loved it!
at first i was confused because i thought "why would ginny be in class with harry?" but that's just a clue to the reader that perhaps all is not how it seems
lol. i love how you automatically assume throughout the story that draco is talking about harry and ginny. it's great how the 1st person viewpoint and the lack of anything but a generic last name makes the ending a suprise. good job
Wow!!!!!!
I thought you were talking about Harry, Ginny and Malfoy for a sec.....wow....i jumped back when I read Serveus, James and Lily!!!
....wow.....
oh my gosh i totally did not know that this was severus i so thought it was malfoy!! only then i thought it was ginny he was in love with oh my gosh this was so good!! your a great writer!!
~CodeRomance
I loved it. You really had me thinking that it was Draco wanting Ginny, it was a good twist, i wish i could pull something like that off I loved, loved, loved it!!!
I just read My Juliet for the first time and followed it by His Juliet. By the way, congratulation on the title. Maybe I don't get a hint (cultural background, missed HP detail), but the title is intriguing. From the direct comparison of the two stories I must say that His Juliet is less even and has more passages of diverse quality. Especially, it seems to me that you overdid some hints in the new version. The older version held the reader more tense and was more JKR-like with respect to character behaviour. On the other hand, the new version (His Juliet) has greater selection of words and I like that very much. And at last, my great praise for story building. You hold the reader captive, tricked, longing and in the end feeling the catarzia (of whatever the English expression for the releaved new view of the world that old Greeks introduced in their dramas).
