ScabbersSaysSqueak is insane. Don't listen to her...I loved it! xx ILoveRemus
And I haven't taken my medication today.
It was a poem.
This is a review.
I love chapter 1 it's great ! I think that you should rhyme it better, I agree with LilmissBrit, somke of the rhymes were stretched. From your beloved sister, Penelope123.
Some of the rhymes WERE stretched, but it's great all the same.
nice poem! wheeeeeiiiiiooooouuuu! sorry, im high on gatorade! it was really creatyive and i enjoyed reading it!
hehe! that was good. you're better at poetry than me!
interesting...some of the rhymes were very dodgy, but the overall effect was good. Also, a very good idea...individual...
Author's Response: Have you ever heard of half-rhymes? Thanks for your reveiew anyway and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
That's good, some of the rhymes seemed a bit stretched, but it was still an overall good poem.
Aaaaaaw...how cute...it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside thinking about the sorting hat...no wait, mental hospital thataway...anyhoo, I think it's diddums!