Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 16:23
Chapter: Snape and Ginny

I forgot to mention before, I love the name Snuffles for Ginny's cat. I'm so happy Harry and Ginny got together. I see Snape is up to his old tricks. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 14:26
Chapter: In with the new

I kind of had a feeling that Ellie would be the DADA teacher. How funny that the gossip was that she was Albus' wife. Sometimes the craziest rumors spread and Hogwarts is no different. You did a great job on the Sorting Hat's song--quite frankly no one does those well in my opinion. The most important part was the ending. I enjoyed Ellie's first lecture. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 14:07
Chapter: Back to Hogwarts

It was good to see Ellie take control of Draco. I was a little surprised to see Ellie recognize Neville. I liked Ellie's talk with Harry about remembering Sirius. I know that Sirius would want Harry to have a good time. He's so young with so many responsibilities.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 13:32
Chapter: Out with the old...

I was worried about how Harry's gift to Ginny would be received. I felt bad for him when Ginny left crying. Wow--so the Minister's been killed. I wonder who the new Minister will be. I was impressed with Ellie's show of temper and power. She must have inherited some of her grandfather's magical power. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 12:42
Chapter: 93 Diagon Alley

I'm always impressed by Harry's entourage. I was struck by Lucius' question to Ellie as to whether she would die for Harry. If you think about it, the Malfoys are rather cowardly, picking on a 16-year old. I can see Moody's instincts are as sharp as ever. Aww, Harry bought Ginny a cat. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 11:07
Chapter: OWLs

Can't wait to see what Harry's plan is. I love the twins. In the movies I always wonder how they learn to speak in unison and finish each other's sentences. Congratulations to Hermione. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 10:43
Chapter: Blossoming

How cute. It's great that Ron and Hermione are a couple now. But it's not nice to tease Ginny and everybody else like that. Leave it to Hermione to look up the statistical probablility that the prophecy is right. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 10:33
Chapter: Foretold

Wow!! I can understand Harry's curiosity with Ellie--just who is she? I'm curious myself. I'm so glad Harry shared the prophecy with his "family" and friends. I think Harry has a little problem asking for help. He's got to learn that you can't just do everything yourself.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 10:07
Chapter: Sweetest Sixteen

I'm new to this website and although I've been reading for a while this is my first review. I enjoyed attending Harry's party. I have tears in my eyes as I watched him open gift after wonderful gift. I especially liked the wand holder and Moody's comments. Ellie's gift was also extremely touching as was Ginny's. Great job on this chapter.

Reviewer: sadtoseetheend
Date: 09/15/09 11:48
Chapter: Another Summer

wow i really loved this story i am kinda new to this site being an avid harry potter fan and not being able to cope wtih the end i was estatic to see that so many fans took it this far!!! but i loved it this was the best i love seeing all the family ties and i love ellie she was a fantastic addition to the already wonderful hp cast !!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Lily
Date: 09/01/09 16:00
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

omg loved it. ellie's so sweet. i love the relaitionship between her and harry, and the quotes. you're so smart.

Reviewer: gracierochelle
Date: 08/08/09 18:43
Chapter: Blossoming

Harry seems kind of out of character...

Reviewer: Magical Messrs
Date: 06/01/09 18:59
Chapter: Aftermath

I loved Sirius and I cried as the will was read. Poor Harry, poor Elizabeth, poor Sirius, poor everybody. I'm crying again, but I will keep reading cause this story is awesome. Tell your sis, i wish her luck and that I think she is VERY BRAVE!

Reviewer: Ashlynne
Date: 05/10/09 10:07
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

Loved it. Will be reading the rest of your work.

Reviewer: Ashlynne
Date: 05/10/09 10:00
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

Loved it. Will be reading the rest of your work.

Reviewer: r3d
Date: 04/25/09 2:09
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

excellent fic, read the whole thing in one day i liked it so much =] i still think that harry should have blasted malfoy into 1000 pieces at the end, but what can you do.

Reviewer: Nova
Date: 12/27/08 17:22
Chapter: Aftermath


Isn't Ellie's mother named Jane?

And Harry's uncle married a woman named Jane, and had a daughter named Elizabeth who is two and a half years older than him?

So Ellie is Harry's cousin... but she said that they died six months before Harry's parents...?


Good fic, though. :D

Reviewer: Whitey9899
Date: 12/18/08 12:08
Chapter: Another Summer

*gives u hate filled glares*

i dont like ur cliff hangers


Reviewer: Whitey9899
Date: 12/18/08 12:06
Chapter: Another Summer

Loved the story....

my fav quote is from dumbledore "they are. i shall cheer when no one is looking"

and yes i DID hate u for those cliff hangers

thou nice ending

thou its sad to see the end of it cause it was really good

keep up the good work


Reviewer: ginnyfan5
Date: 08/08/08 16:23
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Slytherin

that was a great song

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