Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 14:15
Chapter: The Attack

We just met Ellie. You can't take her from us already. Besides, she could probably duel Voldemort and a bunch of Death Eaters single-handedly. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 14:02
Chapter: Let's Talk About Tom

It was interesting to see how the students reacted to saying Voldemort's name. The children of Death Eaters seemed to be the most frightened. Maybe because they had the most reason to be frightened? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 12:44
Chapter: Farewell and Bon Voyage

I think you would've felt worse if it had been someone else. What's gone is gone. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 12:06
Chapter: The Demise of Percy

And here I thought that Harry was having another dream. But I agree with you, if someone had to die, it might as well be Percy. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 10:37
Chapter: The First Protection

I was intrigued by Dumbledore's explanation to Harry about why he and Ellie can hear the other's voice and how the same connection existed between James and Sirius. Ellie must indeed be a powerful witch. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/09 9:54
Chapter: A Lesson In Life

That was really sweet. I enjoyed hearing about the women of the past--Granny Potter, Jane, and Lily and about how traditional and old fashioned wizard society is. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 15:39
Chapter: Surprises

Aww, Charlie finally proposed--well I guess I shouldn't say finally since he proposed when he was 8 or 9 didn't he? So what is the meaning of all of Harry's dreams? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 14:28
Chapter: A Potter Christmas

I love stories about Christmas and the Potter family Christmas is no exception. I can see Dobby's little pile of clothes. Now I'm hungry for Christmas dinner. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 13:16
Chapter: Things That Could Have Been

Well, I sure am feeling all warm and fuzzy and somewhat contemplative. I know why Harry had to stay with the Dursleys but he would've been so much happier with the Weasleys. It's strange how life is at times. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 12:32
Chapter: Making A Home With A House-Elf

I love Dobby. He's too adorable. I want a Dobby. I think you've done a marvelous job on describing Dobby's personality. Great chapter. Loved it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 11:15
Chapter: A Christmas Engagement

That was wonderful. I always like reading about Christmas balls. I agree that the world needs a little madness as long as it's happy, creative madness. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 10:03
Chapter: When Severus Met Elizabeth

Poor Severus--How did he ever get involved with the two women who married Potter men and then become indebted to them. You have to wonder why he did this to himself. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/09 9:11
Chapter: Gryffindor vs. Slytherin

I didn't think it was too bad of a song. Didn't JKR herself write "Weasley is Our King?" It seems as if Ellie has some sort of mental connection with Harry. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 15:07
Chapter: In the Open

Wow--the Weasleys narrowly escaped. But, when did the Weasleys leave the Burrow? They said they hadn't been there for months. This reminds me of a scene from HBP when Death Eaters started the Burrow on fire. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 12:54
Chapter: Aurors and Good Howlers

For some reason I really like Howlers--I just like the concept and when someone receives one I think it's kind of funny. So, that being said, I like the concept of the opposite of a Howler almost better. Excellent chapter. But, I'm wondering what's going to go wrong for Harry.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 12:40
Chapter: Home Truths

That does explain why this book is called The Girl Who Lived. I guess I just kind of went along and trusted that it would all be explained in time. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 12:26
Chapter: Draco's Discovery

Well, that wasn't as bad as I expected. That would make Harry and Ellie cousins. I know I can be really dense sometimes, but I don't see why this is a problem, other than that Ellie and everybody else neglected to tell Harry that he had a cousin. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 11:58
Chapter: Expiscor Diligo

I don't understand why everyone was getting so angry at Harry. Basically, Ellie just blurted out that Halloween was the anniversary of his parents' deaths. He had every right to be upset. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 10:42
Chapter: A game called Quidditch

I was afraid for a minute that Harry would be a gentleman and let Cho have the snitch--but I guess all's fair in quidditch. I liked Dumbledore's approach to legilimency--much trickier. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/21/09 9:16
Chapter: Return of Dumbledore's Army

I'm glad Harry is able to put his memories into a pensieve and sleep better. And I'm glad they're reforming the DA, legally this time. Great chapter.

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