Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 20:07
Chapter: Home Truths

Finally some good answers! This is turning into an amazing plot line. I am very glad you have a sequel to it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 20:02
Chapter: Draco's Discovery

Did any specific Sytherins show up to the DA? Just curious. Ellie is in trouble now!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 19:58
Chapter: Expiscor Diligo

Wow, a very deep and emotional chapter! So sad, but yet great writing.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 19:53
Chapter: A game called Quidditch

I liked the way you wrote the Quidditch Game and the Occumency lesson. I really like this story. Is Ellie coming back into play soon?

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 19:50
Chapter: Return of Dumbledore's Army

Interesting chapter. Hopefully we get more Professor Snape action. He is the perfect character to love to hate! Nice touch to split up the Quidditch captain badges but not the most believable thing as Ron had not been on the team that long. Good anyways!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/03/07 19:46
Chapter: Snape and Ginny

*Cheers Loudly* It's always great to read about Harry and Ginny getting together. Nice emotional balance with Ron's reaction, good humor! Great Chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 20:26
Chapter: In with the new

I think Hogwarts if very lucky to have Ellie teaching DADA. Great to see Malfoy put in his place again! Lovin it

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 20:19
Chapter: Back to Hogwarts

A perfect revenge on the Malfoys! I certainly would not want to mess with Ellie from what us readers have seen of her! Great chapter.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 20:10
Chapter: Out with the old...

Wow. Great job on writing Ellie's outbrust. Things are really getting messy in the wizarding world!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 19:59
Chapter: 93 Diagon Alley

This chapter has everything I like! Fred and George's joke shop, a confrontation with the Malfoys and a great Mrs Weasley moment!! Fantastic!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 19:51
Chapter: OWLs

You have to love "Gred and Forge" for lightening up the mood in any situation! I could not stop reading this fic if I tried. Thank you!!!!!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 19:02
Chapter: Blossoming

Good for Ron. I love the little humorous lines that you cleverly slide in. Love it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 18:20
Chapter: Foretold

The secret is out! Again this this my favorite story and I am lovin how you are writing the emotional drama of it.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 18:14
Chapter: Sweetest Sixteen

Harry had the best birthday party ever celebrating it with his "family". Nicely written and entertaining!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 18:07
Chapter: Aftermath

It is nice to have Harry learn something about his past and family. I think Ellie is the Elizabeth that she mentions. Great story!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/28/07 16:58
Chapter: Sirius's Legacy

Sirius will always be one of my favorite characters and my favorite Marauder. Poor Harry and Ellie!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/27/07 13:25
Chapter: Trouble in Little Whinging

Excellent and interesting. Wonder where Harry might know her from? This is quickly becoming my favorite AU fic.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/27/07 11:54
Chapter: Another Summer

Interesting chapter. I'm assuming this taking place after Order of the Phoenix. I liked how you introduced Harry.

Reviewer: Queen97
Date: 08/18/07 22:53
Chapter: Sacrifice

i'm sending you an e-crucio for your cliff-hangers.

Reviewer: Radiant_817
Date: 08/08/07 20:55
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

completely awesome story. im speechless. it was very well writen. im gonna go read the sequel right now! the only thing i would have liked to see was more ron and hermone moments, and to have harry make his room in a different theme. beachhouse doesnt seem to suit him. but that didnt affect the story at all. over all---it holds the postion of my 2nd favorite, but thats just beacause i read another story that my friend wrote, and by the laws of friendship, i have to say hers is my favorite.

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