Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/18/08 19:00
Chapter: Expiscor Diligo

This is a good chapter, a bit too...emotional, I guess, for my tastes, but good. I just hate it when Harry cries...I don't know why.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/13/08 20:47
Chapter: Return of Dumbledore's Army

Yay! I love the DA. But if Ellie's leading the DA, then who was the sorting hat refering to: Ellie or Harry? I had thought it was Harry but now I'm not sure. Because Ellie is probably the Girl Who Lived...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/13/08 20:40
Chapter: Snape and Ginny

Yay! :D At the rate Snape is going he won't have any students left by the end of the term...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/13/08 20:35
Chapter: In with the new

Ellie's going to have to be careful not to favor the trio...that could lead to trouble. That's a cool twist though; I wasn't expecting it. She'll be a great teacher.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/13/08 13:24
Chapter: Back to Hogwarts

Yay! Back to Hogwarts! This is a good story, great work!

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/12/08 20:23
Chapter: Out with the old...

Oh, whoops, forgot about Dean. But breaking up with him would solve the problem wouldn't it? You sort of feel bad for Dean though; it's not his fault she likes Harry better.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/12/08 20:13
Chapter: 93 Diagon Alley

Uh oh...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/12/08 20:01
Chapter: OWLs

Uh oh, Harry's got a plan...:D I wonder what Hermione's E was in...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/12/08 9:01
Chapter: Foretold

So she is his cousin...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/12/08 8:46
Chapter: Aftermath

For a minute I thought that Ellie was Harry's cousin Elizabeth...but that wouldn't work because even if his aunt Jane was Jane Dumbledore, Ellie would have been Ellie Potter, and she's Ellie Dumbledore. So maybe Jane is Ellie's aunt as well as Harry's? That would mean that Elizabeth was both their cousins, but Ellie and Harry are not blood-related...

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/11/08 21:58
Chapter: Sirius's Legacy

Mysterious girl, isn't she? Can't wait to find out more about Ellie. I'm assuming she is "the Girl who Lived"

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/11/08 21:44
Chapter: Trouble in Little Whinging

Fascinating...I wonder who Dumbledore married?

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 01/11/08 21:36
Chapter: Another Summer

Ooh, Lupin! I love Lupin! Anyway, I don't really have anything to say yet except that it looks like it's going to be a good story. Onward to chapter two!

Reviewer: jenna_weasley x3
Date: 01/07/08 20:30
Chapter: Another Summer

I absolutely love this story- the first one I have read out of all the fan fiction.

Nice work! =)

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 12/24/07 0:52
Chapter: The Attack

Umm... Harry could fight Voldemorts imperius curse, he did so in GOF. just so's ya know...

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 12/24/07 0:44
Chapter: Farewell and Bon Voyage

I really like the next chapter title, idk why, but it seems to add humour to a dark topic, like voldmort. well done.

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 12/14/07 2:41
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

Excellent!!!!! so glad that ellie lived. Well done!

Reviewer: RosiePotter
Date: 12/12/07 20:57
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

I loved this story very much

Reviewer: peggie
Date: 10/27/07 14:13
Chapter: The Unknown Feeling

I really enjoyed your story, so thank you for writing it. I don't review as often as I'd like to; partly because sometimes i can't figure out how to (other web sites) and partly (mostly) because everybody says reviews should be critical and help the writer to improve. Unless there are gross misspellings or blatant grammatically errors I don't feel qualified to criticize. However, I've read all your finished stories and enjoyed them very much.

Reviewer: DMB4life
Date: 10/20/07 15:53
Chapter: In the Open

Ok this is about the 8th time ive read this story im tryin to get u 6 more reveiws

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