this is a sad story i loved it though sad
I agree, write more. It was wonderful. I liked the way you wrote it, the way you wrote Malfoy. It was just ... shocking. You should write a sequil or something.
Write more!loved it.
Author's Response: You have no idea how good your review sounds. I worked so hard on this fic...did you know it was rejected the first time I sent it in? Well, it's a one-shot but I am considering writing more to it, just because you and my beta reader both say it's a good story. Thanks for reviewing!