I'm a Draco/Harry slash fan myself but gave your a read just to see whats what. I've got to say I lOVED it big style. Congrats on an amazing fic. you rock.
Author's Response: You mean you didn't just like it? You loved it? CCCOOOOLLL!!! But I should tell you that I do not rock; I roll. Oh my gosh, did I really just say something as corny as "I roll"? I should be severely punished for that! They could take away my chocolate; I cannot live without chocolate!!!
Very cute, and I love Sirius (Lupin is great, but you can keep him, I prefer Sirius) I think you have his swaggering down pat. Very sweet ending.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!!! Nice to know you prefer Sirius, though I have a close mate who loves him and won't be too thrilled about it! lol
Aww, Remus and Sirius! The events and emotions and dialogue in this are just so great! Naturally, I hope Remus isn't really gay, because you want to marry him, but it's cool to read a story like this! Original, fast-paced and engaging! I particularly liked Sirius's "knight" impressions, and Remus's wit regarding Snape. The Maurauders are very in character, as are Dumbledore and Snape. You rock!
Author's Response: HOORAY!!! You liked the dialogue and thought I stayed true to the characters, the two most important things to me in any written work!!! I'm so glad! *jumps up and down so high that she hits her head on the cieling* I hope Remmy is not really gay either for that reason, but I love Remmy/Siri fics anyway.
Good to see you've tried to keep the Marauders in character. Just one little comment - you can write 'said' sometimes and don't always have to describe the way the person is talking with worlds like 'snapped' etc. It helps the flow of the story and the reader isn't caught up at every sentence reading how the characters' voices sound. Very cute ending, I really liked it.
Author's Response: Dialogue is my fav thing in any novel, fan fic, or short story that I read, so I kinda obsess over how characters talk and what they say, but I guess not everyone is like me thus it might irritate them. Thanks for pointing it out. I think the ending is cute, also. :.)
Well, you're my fav authour, so I had to read this and I must admit that it was well written, but why would you write about Lupin being GAY?! Neither one of us can marry him now! LOL I still liked it though.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm your favourite writer??? Thanks!!! The answer to your question is on my bio.
I luved thisXOXOXOXO. I can describe it in 1 word: PERFECT 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Technically "perfect ten" is two terms, not one. LOL Well, THANK YA VERY MUCH!
Whoa everyone was in character and Remus & Sirius were so cute! 10!
Author's Response: YAY!!! Someone else thought everybody was in canon! I also think they make a cute couple. And a ten??? YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! did I mention YAY!
Mmmmmm...... I'm not really sure what to write. I liked it, that goes without saying, but I thought that Snape would have been meaner. James and Remus were especially well portryed and Sirius too come to think about it. He would od sometihng like that without thinking. ANd Remus is too forgiving for his own good, I don't think I could be. Great story, have you written anymore? *checks* bye.
Author's Response: I did not want to make Snape TOO mean because I really do not believe that he is a bad guy. I tried VERY hard to stay true the characters (like I do with all my fics) so I am extremely pleased that you thought I did with most of them. Sorry if you thought Remus was too forgiving, but in PoA Sirius says "I'm sorry, Remus" and right away Remus replies, "Not at all, Padfoot old friend." so I view him as a forgiving character. I would not be able to forgive so easily either. Thank you for reviewing!!!