I do not enjoy being tickled.
Keep up the good work! You have a sense of wit and humour to rival my own.
Author's Response: Thanks big bunches; I promise not to tickle you!
wow!!! for it being your first it was extremly good... i love remus/sirius fics... oh and for the record if i ever got the chance to date a maurader it would have to be sirius or remus... maainly remus...
Author's Response: I am partial to this fic, ergo it makes me immensely happy that you liked it! If Remus doesn't belong to Sirius than he's MINE.
awww! that was cute! i love the last line ^_^ very well writen, i like your stories alot.
Author's Response: I like that line quite a bit; thanks for mentioning it! I'm thrilled that you consider me a good writer!
Ah thats loevely and very well written :P
Author's Response: Thanks so much; I worked hard on it!
Aww! It's quite lovely! The way you portray Remus is just the cutest I've seen and... oh well Sirius is awesome :D
Also, your fic answers some questions *scratches her chin and thinks about Snape saving Harry in book 1...."
Well, aside from that sweet Oneshot! Loved it :D
Author's Response: I'm estatic that you think I did well and approved of my portrayel of the characters!
Very cute; I loved it. Loved that line at the end: "You know you can't stay mad at me." I always imagine Sirius saying things like that to Remus.
Author's Response: Twas my first Wolfstar fic, so I'm very glad you found it as cutesy as I do. I imagine that he does also!
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Again great story, I love you yur so cool! Go you! lol seriiously though your amazing.
Author's Response: Thanx! Go me! Go me! *does happy dance so children shield thier eyes*
hey, good story.
On your bio, it said you liked poetry. I suggest Edgar allan Poe- he's an amazing poet. and, I LOVE Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go Foaly, go Foaly, go Foaly... right. anyway, great story!!!! Shame there was gaynedss though... i never really pictured Remus or Sirius gay...
Author's Response: I've read some of Poe; he's okay. Emily Dickinson, Longfellow, and Shakespeare are my favourite poets. Foaly is my second most cherished character in the Artemis Fowl series. I like Artemis best. Thanks for reviewing!
Hm, this was one of those stories that didn't make me want to cry but instead left me with a nice warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach. I'm a fan, good job.
Author's Response: A lot of slash fics are loaded with angst, which annoys me, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I could care less if Snivel, uh, Snape went and drowned himself in the lake."
Dumbledore calmly answered, "It was a noble act nonetheless."
That is SO like Dumbledore! *grins wildly* Yes, I'm living up to my word. I told you I would review for ALL your stories. You rock! Brilliant! :) Oh, and this is the one slash pairing that I understand and support!
Author's Response: Dumbledore is the greatest, isn't he? I appreciate your reviews! Wolfstar is the only slash ship I read or write because, as you said, the others do not make sense. Besides, I love the Marauders' era! If other people support other slash ship I do not mind; I simply do not read them. I shouldn't discuss irrational ships, though, since I like Hermione\Draco, which I know would never truly happen.
I enjoyed reading your fic - it was very good. I'd agree with Diamond Quill here that the RL/SB is subtle. Um, I dunno what else to say ... xxacirexx
Author's Response: I am ESTATIC you enjoyed it! This was my first RLSB fic and I wanted it to be subtle. I have written otherRS fics since this one where tis much less subtle. lol
A very enjoyable read, especially since it is a different slant on the whole 'Snape seeing werewolf-remus' topic. I like it, I like the way you've got the characterization down to a t, and the humor and the Sirius/Remus pairing. It was subtle but still there, and very well written.
However, if there is one part of the story that I really don't think works, it's this line: 'The four blokes saw the tall, auburn-haired figure of Albus Dumbledore glaring at them.' It just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the story and sounds slightly strange when you read it.
Anywayz, I'm loving the story; shame its a oneshot, but I don't suppose you can take it much further. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks; I'm happy you enjoyed my version of the incident. I try my hardest with characterisation and though this is dramaticdark sort of fic since Snape finds out Remus is a werewolf I did want some humour in it, so I'm glad you thought both of those things were good.
I decided that I was going through all your fics and then realized that this was the only other S/R one. I almost cried! Oh well...onto the review I would have to say the thing that hit me about this chapter was how absolutely different it is from my own version of the night of the prank and what happens after it. (I'd love for you to read it, but there's still one or two more chapters to go through first.) I think you have a great mix between the humor and the seriousness. Sirius-ness to, once we're at it. I really do think that you kept them quite in character. And I hate Lupin the square, so, nice to see that you let him have a sense of humor. I would suggest that you use a spell-checker (sorry; the repressed writing teacher in me emerges) or, if you are using it, to stop. Because, if you don't, a)you will never learn how to spell and b) you won't get corrected when you use a--dang, what's the word you use for words that sound the same but mean different things? Like to, too and two? Anyway, the spell checker won't correct those. That is all! Can't wait to go through the rest!
Author's Response: The words you're talking about are called homophones. Thanks oodles for reading and reviewing my fics!
OOOO, Sirius/Remus slash! I love this ship! *squeee*
*cough* Sorry, got a bit enthusiastic about that. You should probably be warned that this is a SPEW review, and will thus be very, very long and annoying. I apologize. XD it will also contain a lot of these…
First off, I would like to inform you that the thing that stuck out most for me in this story was the characterization. Everyone seemed, for the most part, bang on target. Sirius was Sirius, Remus was Remus, James was James…oh, you know what I mean! The story itself answered a lot of questions generated by canon, which is brilliant and exactly what a fanfic that follows canon should do! Kudos to you!
Okay, now to in-depth reviewing, which will start off with a bit of nit-picking (I apologize). The first thing I noticed was that you should probably break "Wow! That good?" Sirius enthusiastically shouted causing many students to jump, however, Remus still had his mind completely focused on his work. into two sentences by inserting a full-stop before however, because it is a run-on.
A couple of annoying comments from the wonderful British person obsessed with characterization that I am…When you have Sirius say chill out I get an image of someone American. Sorry to be a pain…but I don’t think they said that in 70ies England. I might be wrong: I wasn’t alive in the 70ies and I spend minimal amounts of time in England, but I am English…if that counts for something. -.- I guess if I never investigated I'd always wonder what would have happened if I had gone, so I'll check it out. is another quite American way of phrasing things. Again, I might just be a bit picky, but I don’t think this sounds like Snape either. Perhaps if you change guess to suppose and I’ll check it out to I shall investigate it might sound more like Snape. He has just always stuck me as a very precise character, and I feel his vocabulary should reflect that. XD
(Annoyingness continues…The four blokes saw the tall, auburn-haired figure of Albus Dumbledore glaring at them. First of all, blokes is a very slang term which should probably be avoided during the narrative of the story, unless it’s from a first-person point of view of someone who would use such a term. Secondly, Dumbledore would have had white hair then also, since the last time I remember reading about him having auburn hair was when he was teaching Tom Riddle, and that was about 30 years previously. Just a minor issue. Sorry about that! >.<’
Now that the nit-picking is over, I shall shower you in praise! *hands an umbrella* Right-o, I love your characterisation. Have said it once and will say it again: It was almost always bang on target! For example: Irritating Remus was a pastime he adoured as much as pulling pranks is hilarious! It’s exactly the sort of thing Sirius would like to do! (and the little spelling mistake—adore doesn’t have a u—doesn’t make it any less humorous XD) Sirius ignored them and said solemnly to Remus, "You are going to keep that bit of hair, aren't you? It may be valuable someday." "Oh yes, I will treasure it forever," responded Remus sarcastically. is another wonderful bit of characterisation. Sometimes, people make Remus too much of a square, and this just shows (along with the line further down about Snivellus and flobberworms) that he DOES have a sense of humour like Sirius and James.
Well done! This is one of the most honest and worth-reading Sirius/Remus fics I’ve come across that actually have something to do with canon, and the first that I have read that addresses the Snivellus incident in full detail. Good job. (P.S: Feel free to vitually hit me upside the head for leaving such a bloody long review...)
Author's Response: This is the longest review I've ever gotten on any website! lol Thanks for complimenting my characterization; tis very important to me. I like how you complimented some things and crticised others; very professional. I'm English too (My blood is more Irish than anything, yet I live in England.) and I say "chill out" but that may result from all of the American movies I watch. I did actually have Severus having a better vocab for that part, though the mods wouldn't accept that because "teenagers wouldn't speak like that" so there's the result. Sorry if you thought the other sentence was run-on. I just enjoy using the word "however." I agree, Remus does have a sense of humour and in my fics I always try to show it. Thanks again!
Really great! Especially Sirius ignoring the girls to play with Remus's hair!
Author's Response: We know Sirius ignores those silly swooning girls from "Snape's Worst Memory" in OotP and for some reason I invariably envision Sirius playing with Remus' hair; therefore it pleases me immensely that you liked that!
What I mean by more soon, is more of your works. Heh. ^_^
Author's Response: I would LOVE it if you read and reviewed more of my fics!
Aww! It was beautiful! And I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Encouraging reviews make me so happy!
That was so sweet and feel-goodish! I love the ending, it was cute. Sirius and Remus were adorable together. 10! And it does make sense that Sirius would give Remus the nickname if they were dating.
Author's Response: I am pleased it made you feel good and that you thought it deserved a 10. Thank you oodles!
this is such a great story! you have them so in character, and remus/sirius are SO CUTE together! it makes sense that sirius would have given remus the nickname 'moony' if they were dating--good idea! this story makes me happy :)
Author's Response: Really? Thank you! Your review makes me happy!!!