Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 17:40
Chapter: The First Friday

Very well written chapter! Interesting about another part to the prophecy!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 17:25
Chapter: Year Six Begins

Love all these long chapters! Very nice job on Malfoy, It is awesome to see him get put in his place like that!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 17:08
Chapter: DA Reformed

Fantastic chapter! Ginny is soo much powerful and strong than I think JKR shows her as in the books. Great job!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 12:10
Chapter: A New Family

Yes, I totally agree with you. Alot of the characters have been through situations that many adults have not even experienced, of course it would have made them mature faster. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 12:01
Chapter: Surprise Party

Amazing birthday for Harry! Loved this chapter. Thought it was cool how now almost half the Gryffindor Qudditch team has the best brooms available. The love triange could prove to be complicated later on!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/01/07 11:45
Chapter: Letters

Nice long chapter! The idea of multiple voices is great. Interesting about Hermione being torn between both Harry and Ron.

Reviewer: HPluvr46
Date: 07/24/07 15:13
Chapter: Ravenclaw

Just wanted to let you know that the spell is spelled cruciatus. Otherwise, great chapter!

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 07/18/07 14:11
Chapter: Ginny

What the heck is it that ginny found? HAHA its awesome story so far

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 07/06/07 14:56
Chapter: Marked by the Dark Lord

that was amazing i realy liked it keep up the good work.

Reviewer: MrsH
Date: 06/26/07 22:24
Chapter: Marked by the Dark Lord

Lovely story -- I had a power outtage on the next-to-last chapter, and was quite upset for the 2 hours it took to get back online and ifnish it. I read it in two sittings -- would have read it in one if I hadn't had to go to work. Thanks!

Reviewer: Giwea
Date: 06/10/07 13:25
Chapter: Year Six Begins

i really like it, really good.

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/23/07 22:39
Chapter: Debt of Blood

"He later faked his death in a battle with Sirius Black, biting off his own finger to leave behind as evidence that he was dead." hmmm... intresting didn't he cut off his finger not bite it just like when he cut off his hand? What else can i say but this is simply more evidence agnaist you.

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/23/07 21:46
Chapter: Ravenclaw

"Ginny dove into Harrys view right next to the Ravenclaw Keeper, and then reversed her direction. "
Obviously you haven't read "Quidditch through the ages" either for no player is able to go near the keeper unless in possession of the quaffle even then they can't get very close for chasers used to smash in to the keeper seriously harming the keeper. Also the keeper isn't able to be hit with a bludger...possibly if they have the quaffle..remember when the slytherins hit wood with the bludger? oh wait i forgot that you haven't read the books or seen the movies....and if you have, will then it's just sad! And to think this used to be my favorite story...thankfully i have new favorites. The plot of the story is brill just needs to be beta'd. You have too many careless mistakes within your story and i haven't even been checking your spelling and grammer (mostly).. also i don't very much care for you're ginny...she's very "un-ginny like". She says she "tuff" but not? ....oh right "TUFF" is slang meaning cool what you meant was "TOUGH" as in strong I don't remember what chapter that was in but i do know that it was wrong. And your what like 33? pityful.

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/20/07 15:01
Chapter: Tryouts

Krum was a idiot...He wouldn't giggle like you had him doing! Did you by any chance happen to read any of JK Rowlings fucking books?! I'm not leaving another fucking review or comment until those god damned authors notes are fucking deleted! I'm sorry did I get too personal?

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/20/07 14:19
Chapter: Harry's Confession

that authors note at the end is getting really annoying...people will leave a fucking review if they feel you're story is worthy of one, not because you threaten to not write any more...that just makes readers not want to read your story. so really is there any fucking point to it?

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/19/07 17:50
Chapter: The First Meeting

he-he it's really neat the whole chocolate frog card thing..wither you made it up or read about it it's really original! : )

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/19/07 1:20
Chapter: The First Friday

he-he i'm so glad ron was awarded the most points ever at once by dumbledore! : )

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/19/07 1:02
Chapter: Year Six Begins

the only thing i dind't like about this chapter is that dumbledore sisn't say the forbidden forest is strickly that...forbidden in his start of term speech.... : )

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/18/07 15:41
Chapter: DA Reformed

i didn't really like ginny in this chapter what with the whole flaming of the eyes and fits she had...i know i really like her later though...the bad thing is that i wann skip through all the love triangle stuff...my favorite scene is definately when H/g go skydiving!...kinda sorta skydiving anyways...but i'll read everything else againh cause it'll make that scene seem like so much more! : )

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/18/07 15:21
Chapter: A New Family

i think ron and harry would be likr that around each other...they've known each other for years and have always shared a dorm together...but i didn't like the speech harryu gave to mr&mrs weasley it was awkard..i wanted to laugh...but at the same time it's the only way to get the point across isn't it? : )

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