oh, dear... i dont want harry's heart to be broken, but hermione better choose ron!
im not sure it was the best idea to tell everyone the prophecy, but al least they didnt tell them all of it.
ok, so in the second prophecy it means ron, ginny, and hermione, right?
that was a good chapter. its kinda weird for hagrid to be a student, but i guess it works.
its so cool that they have different voices and such! and that bit about ginny was cool! and i like that she calls him Tom
that speach with harry and mr and mrs weasley was...nice? im not sure wat to call it, although im not one for touchy- feely heartfelt conversations with parents. lol
i really hope harry and hermione dont end up together! she and ron are so perfect!
that was an awesome first chapter!! a bit confusing, but i know that you'll clear that up.
you have no idea how happy i am to finally find this storey. i read it a year or too ago and printed out the last past. i re-read that like a week ago and have been trying to find it ever since. i love this storey it is one of my favourite hehe
It was kind of anticlimatic, the way this story ended. It went from Hardcore-Live up to my expectations!Ginny to mushy-melty-fluffy-ILoveYou!Ginny.
/good story, but 'Mione' is a bit noncannon for me.
Cho is developing into a wonderful character.
Did you grow up speaking a language other than English? I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but I noticed a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Maybe your beta missed them, I don't know.. Otherwise, I really loved your story. The writing behind it was so wonderful I could easily look past those little errors. =]
It's Apparate, and apparition. But good story nonetheless.
The love triangle is quite devious...
I loved it!!! On to the sequel! :)
Looking over past reviews for this chapter--no one else seemed to have caught on to the dragon/phoenix connotation--dragon being male energy and phoenix being female energy, together forming a bond of opposites like yin/yang. Maybe I'm the only one into Chinese mythology?
Hmmmm . . . . Dragon and Phoenix, huh? That's perfect! ^_^
No--I didn't really think Hermione would pick Harry, but the thought that Harry picked Hermione makes me ill.
Okay, I know from the sequel that Harry ends up with Ginny so I'm going to have to try to bear with this story! (It's actually very good, except that I can't stomach Harry and Hermione together).