Package? What package? Ha!
I was completely surprised by the sudden H/G turn of events. Surprised, but delighted.
I'd recommend this story to anyone.
I can see how you would be good enough to write your own books. I'd say you've warmed up with fan fiction.
This is really well written. (Except for using 'weather' when you mean 'whether'.)
And I thought the previous chapter was exciting. Silly me, THIS was a heart stopper.
That was exciting. The scene where Albus attacked Harry was especially tense.
"Does this mean you’re going to buy me a different present for making Prefect?”
That was a great line from Ginny.
I hope Chow doesn't get involved with Harry.
I'm afraid if I keep making suggestions you'll mail me a pencil and pad of paper to write my own story. lol
Harry and Bridgette get the dress for Hermione was a nice touch.
Just the way you've set up Ginny, Harry, and Bridgette, well, Ginny still looks like the best match for Harry. In my humble opinion.
I finally figured ir out, how to leave a review that is. It's not as easy as it could be.
Each chapter is as well written as the one before it.
lol, the voices somehow remind me of Animal House...the Angel on one shoulder and the Devil on the other.
You asked for it, and yes it's my first time through the story. I'm a HP/GW shipper, but we'll see how this works out. After all it's fiction anyway...right?
I really enjoy this story is was wonderful.
know i'm going to read the sequel.
This story is really good so far.
I can't wait to harry and ginny to be together.
their going to be a couple rigth???
I have to agree with Bon_Y_Bon369's comment: *Barfs over H/H ship* It's just not right, I don't know why, seeing as how Hermione and Ron have been friends as long as Harry and Hermione. I guess I've just never seen a connection the way you do with Ron and Hermione....they balance each other out perfectly, and Harry and Ginny are always so cute together. I'm not giving up hope though, and I will continue with both this story and it's sequel.
For some reason, I don't know why, I just can't see it.....not Harry and Hermione, just doesn't seem natural. Not that I don't like your story, cause so far, I'm really enjoying it.
Well, the idea of the chocolate frog cards, wherever it came from is a great idea...sneaky sneaky
I like the story its quite good.
It is a nice story but I think Harry will always be the stronger of the four, more powerful!
k i'll review. Alright i'm not with the whole triangle thing but you're kinda hinting you'll stop so I'll stick with it
good chapter...poor percy! i almost felt worse for him than the others. hha
i cannNOT imagine not sleeping in two years..that woujold be awwful!!
well i HOPED she would pick harry. just because i like ron. butttt yeah this was a very exciting chapter!!