Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 21:07
Chapter: Marked by the Dark Lord

Package? What package? Ha!

I was completely surprised by the sudden H/G turn of events. Surprised, but delighted.

I'd recommend this story to anyone.

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 20:09
Chapter: Debt of Blood

Holy cow!
I can see how you would be good enough to write your own books. I'd say you've warmed up with fan fiction.

This is really well written. (Except for using 'weather' when you mean 'whether'.)

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 18:24
Chapter: Ravenclaw

And I thought the previous chapter was exciting. Silly me, THIS was a heart stopper.

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 15:11
Chapter: Discovery

That was exciting. The scene where Albus attacked Harry was especially tense.

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 13:56
Chapter: My Life for Yours

"Does this mean you’re going to buy me a different present for making Prefect?”

That was a great line from Ginny.
I hope Chow doesn't get involved with Harry.

I'm afraid if I keep making suggestions you'll mail me a pencil and pad of paper to write my own story. lol

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 8:53
Chapter: The Ball

Harry and Bridgette get the dress for Hermione was a nice touch.

Just the way you've set up Ginny, Harry, and Bridgette, well, Ginny still looks like the best match for Harry. In my humble opinion.

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 8:19
Chapter: Bridgette

I finally figured ir out, how to leave a review that is. It's not as easy as it could be.

Each chapter is as well written as the one before it.

Reviewer: knightsbridge
Date: 08/06/06 13:14
Chapter: Year Six Begins

lol, the voices somehow remind me of Animal House...the Angel on one shoulder and the Devil on the other.

Reviewer: knightsbridge
Date: 08/06/06 10:53
Chapter: Surprise Party

You asked for it, and yes it's my first time through the story. I'm a HP/GW shipper, but we'll see how this works out. After all it's fiction anyway...right?

Reviewer: sabrina250
Date: 08/06/06 1:46
Chapter: Marked by the Dark Lord

I really enjoy this story is was wonderful.
know i'm going to read the sequel.

Reviewer: sabrina250
Date: 08/04/06 22:39
Chapter: Year Six Begins

This story is really good so far.
I can't wait to harry and ginny to be together.
their going to be a couple rigth???

Reviewer: LMelynn
Date: 08/03/06 11:58
Chapter: Harry's Confession

I have to agree with Bon_Y_Bon369's comment: *Barfs over H/H ship* It's just not right, I don't know why, seeing as how Hermione and Ron have been friends as long as Harry and Hermione. I guess I've just never seen a connection the way you do with Ron and Hermione....they balance each other out perfectly, and Harry and Ginny are always so cute together. I'm not giving up hope though, and I will continue with both this story and it's sequel.

Reviewer: LMelynn
Date: 08/03/06 2:04
Chapter: Surprise Party

For some reason, I don't know why, I just can't see it.....not Harry and Hermione, just doesn't seem natural. Not that I don't like your story, cause so far, I'm really enjoying it.

Reviewer: LMelynn
Date: 08/03/06 1:29
Chapter: Letters

Well, the idea of the chocolate frog cards, wherever it came from is a great idea...sneaky sneaky

Reviewer: moine
Date: 07/07/06 18:42
Chapter: The First Meeting

I like the story its quite good.

Reviewer: agent_taylor
Date: 07/07/06 14:14
Chapter: The First Friday

It is a nice story but I think Harry will always be the stronger of the four, more powerful!

Reviewer: Iamhouseelf
Date: 06/28/06 17:03
Chapter: Surprise Party

k i'll review. Alright i'm not with the whole triangle thing but you're kinda hinting you'll stop so I'll stick with it

Reviewer: kookachoo
Date: 06/28/06 10:14
Chapter: Christmas Surprise

good chapter...poor percy! i almost felt worse for him than the others. hha

Reviewer: kookachoo
Date: 06/27/06 11:06
Chapter: Ginny

i cannNOT imagine not sleeping in two years..that woujold be awwful!!

Reviewer: kookachoo
Date: 06/26/06 10:52
Chapter: Ron's Diary

well i HOPED she would pick harry. just because i like ron. butttt yeah this was a very exciting chapter!!

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