Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 04/17/08 23:08
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

AWWWWW!!!!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/25/07 19:34
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Congrats on your first fic, it was great. You did a great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Reviewer: sectumsempra_is_me
Date: 11/07/06 13:31
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

this story's really sweet. i love tha idea of them getting together.

Reviewer: ginny91
Date: 08/10/06 17:46
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

how did he get up the stairs? i thought they were enchanted so something like that woudln't happen. oh well. i loved it!!!

Reviewer: ginny91
Date: 08/10/06 17:44
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

how did he get up the stairs? i thought they were enchanted so something like that woudln't happen. oh well. i loved it!!!

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 06/17/06 2:35
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Really good ending but the confession seemed out of place and too quick. I thought that Ron had not said that out loud! However, the story was very cute and and that warm, fuzzy feeling of a good fluffy fic!

Reviewer: muggle2witch
Date: 06/04/06 9:17
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

hi I am a newbie yours is a real sweet story.I love mushy ones, keep it up.and please review mine when it gets posted

Reviewer: muggle2witch
Date: 06/04/06 9:16
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

hi I am a newbie yours is a real sweet story.I love mushy ones, keep it up.and please review mine when it gets posted

Reviewer: flo
Date: 04/21/06 0:44
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Absolutely romantic!!!

Reviewer: libby627onVTM
Date: 04/19/06 16:01
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

That was bloody brilliant! It was soooo sweet. There are a lot of spelling errors though, I would take care of those.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/25/05 18:12
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Ron wouldn't be that honest but great fic all the same

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/20/05 16:07
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

I liked it, but I don't think Ron would be that honest.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/20/05 16:07
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

So0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0 cute!

Reviewer: Christy_Weasley
Date: 08/22/05 10:02
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

I dunno...it just seemed a little too OOC for Ron to just go and tell her about wanting to kiss her and tuck her in, good writing just not how I imagined it.

Reviewer: chickenlover172000
Date: 08/12/05 20:21
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

nice work!!!!

Reviewer: Citha
Date: 07/15/05 0:28
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Ah I was grinning like a fool through the whole story. Very good!!

Reviewer: tuttifrutti193
Date: 07/07/05 23:13
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

awwwwwwwwww i luv it ryt mor stories lyk dese ((r/hr)) wot as much fluff as dis 1.. it wuz perfect.. lol

Reviewer: Emilylightof flamel family
Date: 03/14/05 9:03
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

so cute wish i could write like that but i cant ...i don't like critisizing work cuz i never write...

Reviewer: x2pttrclue32
Date: 03/13/05 0:28
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

Fluff Fluff Fluff! Good job! I really liked it! And like I say to everybody else, I don;t even like romance too much. I liked how you had Ron wanting to go somewhere and then have him...not. ;) But I did notice one canon error, if I'm not mistaken. Ron couldn't have gone into the girl's dormitories because in the CoS, the stairs turn into slides when boys try to go up there. And another thing, I thought that you moved into the 'comfessions' a little too fast and sudden. Try to wither drag it out or make it more sublte. If you make it too sudden, it will sound weird and not make the romance believable enough. I liked the ending...;) Great work.

Reviewer: Mandee
Date: 03/07/05 11:01
Chapter: Snow Ball Absentees

That was a really sweet fic! Continue writing, you're good at it... (9)

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