Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 19:36
Chapter: Revelations
poor james! wont lily ever listen to him? ru sure it gets happy??!!
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 19:30
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder
I like it, but how much longer is Lily going to give James the silent treatment? It makes me depressed! Please make it happy! :)
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 19:24
Chapter: Noverus
I do not like Alyssa. Not one bit. She's evil!
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 18:52
Chapter: Truth or Dare, Wizard Style
Never thought Lily would get drunk! Ha!
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 18:49
Chapter: Gryffindor Vs. Slytherin
Yay! James and Lily at the dance together! How romantic...*sighs, lost in thoughts*
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 18:33
Chapter: Full Moon
So Joanne found out about Remus? Tut tut. I hope she doesn't feel any differently about him.
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 18:25
Chapter: Operation R.A.G.
Oh, so that's what 'rag' stands for! Sweetness of honey nut cheerios!!!
Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 04/28/07 18:19
Chapter: First Names and a Plan
I don't have any idea what 'rag' stands for. Tell me tell me tell me tell me!!!
Author's Response: Operation R.A.G. stands for Operation Red and Gold. I thought I made that clear in chapter three *shrugs* ah well, guess not.
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/25/07 20:40
Chapter: The Holiday Dance Part I
I don't like that aly girll......ewwww....she's a hoe. Slut bitch and watever else
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/25/07 6:27
Chapter: The Heads Meeting
Wata player!!!!!!
Hahaha
Love the story...I think I said that already
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/25/07 6:13
Chapter: First Names and a Plan
Wat does r.a.g. Stand for....I'm blonde here and slow.....
Great story
Reviewer: i_luv_sirius
Date: 04/21/07 16:06
Chapter: The Holiday Dance Part II
I LOVED THE RENT REFERENCE!! I'm still singing La Vie Bohiem in my head!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed that! More broadway references to come!
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: HPandDRfreak
Date: 04/19/07 15:15
Chapter: First Names and a Plan
"Lily blushed but for different reasons Alexis and Joanne thought." i believe that there should be a "than" in this sentence?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for pointing these things out. I don't think I had the first two chapters betaed so that could explain the elementery errors.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: HPandDRfreak
Date: 04/19/07 15:06
Chapter: First Names and a Plan
ok, in the last chapter, u had the sentence "James and Remus dashed out of the compartment into the middle of the moving train." when the pair are going to the Heads'/prefects' carriage, however, the first sentence of this chapter says "Lily walked to the middle of the train and turned left into a compartment." lily should be walking FROM the middle, not TOWARD it........ right?
Reviewer: HPandDRfreak
Date: 04/19/07 15:03
Chapter: Just a Flicker
...Prefects can take and add points from houses but if they take advantage of this privilege, it SELL be taken away...i believe "sell" is supposed to be "shall"
Reviewer: HPandDRfreak
Date: 04/18/07 15:17
Chapter: Just a Flicker
im rereading ur story, and i hardly EVER reread books/stories un less they're REEEALLY good *hinthint* ....... i found a mistake in the instructional letter from dumbledore to the head boy and girl.....
Author's Response: Thanks! Let me know what that error is so I can fix it, I'd really appreciate it. The next chapter is at the beta.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 04/14/07 17:00
Chapter: When One Door Closes, Another One Opens
Oh please update!!! I think this is one of the best L/J love stories I have ever read!
Author's Response: Thanks you! It is quite a honor to be called one of the best L/J stories because there are so many amazing stories and authors out there. The next chapter is currently with my beta.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: snejku
Date: 04/07/07 9:04
Chapter: When One Door Closes, Another One Opens
Ok just finished readning your story. I must admit I didn't expect at the begining that it's going to be that good. And I feel sorry for that!! OK I like your way of writing. Another good story about Lily and James (as well as Maruders). I can't wait to see the next chapter. Your story has become one of my favourite :)
Keep up the good work and happy Easter :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad my writing style has grown on you. I'm in the process of typing up the next chapter and will have it up ASAP.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: CarolinaP123
Date: 04/05/07 21:44
Chapter: When One Door Closes, Another One Opens
I LOVE YOUR Story:]] YOUr an amzing writer:]] keep on writing!! i CANT wait to see what HAPPENDS NEXT:]]
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm in the process of typing up the next chapter and will have it up ASAP.
Miss Radcliffe~
Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 03/31/07 19:44
Chapter: When One Door Closes, Another One Opens
Yay. Lily and James are together! Yesss! Is Joanne alright? Ahhh. Can't wait! But excellent chapter! =D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have the next chapter up ASAP. You'll just have to wait to find out about Joanne.
Miss Radcliffe~
