Reviews For Loathing or Love?
Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 03/02/07 16:01
Chapter: Revelations

Woww. When is Lily going to forgive James??!! Excellent job, and I like how you used real characters and spells. =)

Author's Response: Thanks! It takes a lot of effort to use and make up spells (you need to use Latin) so I"m glad you noticed this. Sorry if you're impatient about Lily forgiving James (I'd be too), but everything is going according to the overall plan and nothing happens without a reason. I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: 365 letters_ryan gosling 20
Date: 03/02/07 15:55
Chapter: Revelations

Omigoodness, I loved this chapter and I am so glad this story was updated!!! I cannot wait for next chapter!!! I'm sure it will be great!!! Poor James... :-(

Author's Response: Thanks! This chapter actually deleted itself from the queue...twice. So this was the third time I submitted it and I'm relieved it's finally up. I feel bad for what I've had to do to James and for what's still to come *hint, hint, wink, wink* I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 03/02/07 13:49
Chapter: Revelations

Dang Lily needs to listen to him. Geez. Anywy, you have to post the next part son!

Author's Response: Yeah, she's stubborn. I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: HPandDRfreak
Date: 02/08/07 15:18
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

positively perfect! i don't believe i spotted any spelling mistakes in this beautiful chapter! keep them coming!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 18 is in queue! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: self named harry potter freak
Date: 02/02/07 20:22
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

This story just keeps getting better and better! I loved Lily and James' conversation durring Potions. It had just the right amount of cautiousness and distrust on Lily's part and James' perfect amount of pride and the typical male trying to talk his way out of a compromising situation. Among the seriousness, there was the bits of fun like the complaining about breakfast ending early and the upcomming Quidditch match. I'm also guessing that when Peter gets involved with the Death Eaters, "homework" will be his excuse for his frequent absences. Then there's the Remus/Jo conflict that always keeps things interesting. I love how aside from the main, and excellent, plot, you have many other storylines going. The whole Remus/Jo and Sirius/Alexis plotlines mean that even when Lily and James are having a relatively unconflicted time, there's still a lot of action going on in the story. This is excellent!
~Snhpf

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found this chapter full of information and interesting because I've gotton some comments that it was too short. I'm currently writing chapter 24 and your comments about the different storylines has helped me get over a major writer's block I've been having. I've been debating whether or not to include more Alexis/Sirius na Remus/Jo in later chapters and this has helped a lot. I'm glad you liked the James/Lily conversations in the Potions room. That was fun to write! Thanks again and I hope "Bloom" is updated soon. Chapter 18 is in queue. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/01/07 17:06
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

Hurry up, terrific writer!!!

Author's Response: Thanks you! I'm hoping to submit chapter 18 this weekend. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: hp_bookworm
Date: 02/01/07 2:20
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

It was a good chapter, and hopefully chapter 18 will come soon because I'm really impatient and I want to see them get together! You've done a great job so far, poor James gets the cold shoulder from Lily thanks to that skank Alyssa...where was she in this chapter?(actually forget I asked that I don't want to see her back in the story)

Reviewer: hp_bookworm
Date: 02/01/07 2:19
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

It was a good chapter, and hopefully chapter 18 will come soon because I'm really impatient and I want to see them get together! You've done a great job so far, poor James gets the cold shoulder from Lily thanks to that skank Alyssa...where was she in this chapter?(actually forgot I asked that I don't want to see her back in the story)

Author's Response: Alyssa will make an appearance again whether you like it or not (I'm not sure if you do or not). As for Lily and James getting together, I'll only say this: not long now. Chapter 18 will be submitted soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 01/31/07 21:31
Chapter: The Holiday Dance Part I

hey could you email me the dress pictures? i love new designs and want to see how you draw. i am an aspiring artist myself...my email is annarainbow@hotmail.com...do the subject box as mugglenet dress pictures!

Author's Response: I'll try to get the pictures and e-mail them but no promises. They're at a friends house who lives far away and I'd have to scan them into the computer etc etc. They're just some sketches my friends and I drew and none of us are artists, lol. In my opinion these drawings look terrible, but I'll try to get them to you anyway. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 01/31/07 21:31
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

hey...this is really cool! you should update it more..ooh and get revenge on alyssa whatsherface...

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 01/31/07 21:31
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

hey...this is really cool! you should update it more..ooh and get revenge on alyssa whatsherface...

Author's Response: Thanks! I try to update as much as I can, but I have an insanely busy schedule. As for Alyssa....she'll get what she deserves....eventually. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 01/31/07 21:18
Chapter: The Holiday Dance Part I

hey could you email me the dress pictures? i love new designs and want to see how you draw. i am an aspiring artist myself...my email is annarainbow@hotmail.com...do the subject box as mugglenet dress pictures!

Author's Response: I'll try. I'm actually a terrible artist and my friends and I drew the dresses partly for fun but also to help me get a visual so I could describe the dresses. One of my friends currently has the journal they're in but I'll see what I can do! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: MissSammiekins
Date: 01/31/07 21:03
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

Kenneth Jennings? Like that Jeopardy guy? :)

Good chapter, although a little short. I hope Lily lets James explain soon!

There was only one thing that bothered me. In the very beginning of the chapter, McGonagall said that people make the mistake of flicking their wands downward, then when James did the spell he pointed his wand down, and it was supposedly perfect. Maybe it was a typo? If I'm just obliviously missing something, please tell me!

~Sammie

Author's Response: Actually, I totally made up the name Kenneth Jennings. About the wand thing, I"ll check up on that. I was trying to make an allusion to the spell McGonagall taught the students in CoS. The spell was "Ferreverto" and it changed an animal into a goblet. I looked up Latin translation stuff and came up with Ferremuto. Thanks! Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/31/07 19:26
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

I like this. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: California
Date: 01/31/07 17:03
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

this is really good

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: loonygirl101
Date: 01/31/07 15:57
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

you need to make ur chapter longer!!!!!!!

Reviewer: loonygirl101
Date: 01/31/07 15:57
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

you need to make ur chapter longer!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok, but can you tell me why? Chapters 18-23 are already written. Are you just eager for more or do you think the chapter itself would have a better quality if it was longer? Let me know and chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 01/31/07 15:00
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

Awww...And they were getting along so well until that...SCARLETT WOMAN came along. *sends a few Unforgiveables Alyssa's way*

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you hate Alyssa, that means I'm doing a good job! All I'll say is not long now... Chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 01/31/07 14:52
Chapter: The Holiday Dance Part II

And thriteen orders of fries, is that it here?

(I picked up where you left off) Thanks for including my favorite song in RENT!!

Author's Response: Lol, I love Rent and all of broadway. I'm glad you appreciated this allusion! Chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 01/31/07 14:12
Chapter: The Cold Shoulder

Great chapter!!
Aww poor James!!
Cont soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!


Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 18 will be submitted very soon. Miss Radcliffe~

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